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Thomas119gold
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0 posted 2003-04-29 09:58 AM



Gentle is the skin
that I am picturing
soft is your voice
after our kiss

smooth and slow is my hand
across your arm as we embrace
a slight wind blows your hair
and I can sense your perfume

we are silent but we speak
we are warmed by our thoughts
knowing together we can create
a living poem of love

© Copyright 2003 Thomas Goldsworthy - All Rights Reserved
Krishankins
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1 posted 2003-04-29 10:01 AM


Hopeless romanticism....
Nice indeed!

The only one that can hold you back is yourself.

Justbleu
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2 posted 2003-04-29 01:47 PM


This is sooo romantic.....Loved it!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


Brad Majors
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3 posted 2003-04-29 03:00 PM


very romantic!
junemac
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4 posted 2003-04-29 05:35 PM


awwwww so lovely, someone is so lucky to have you feel this way. i enjoyed this.
hugs june x

nakdthoughts
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5 posted 2003-04-29 05:40 PM


a living poem of love

lovely
M

garysgirl
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6 posted 2003-04-29 05:46 PM


Thomas, this is so beautiful. I love it,
especially this....

we are silent but we speak
we are warmed by our thoughts
knowing together we can create
a living poem of love



Hugs,  
Ethel

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7 posted 2003-04-29 10:49 PM


Oh yeah, you've got it BAD.

This is simply beautiful - your short lines are so GOOD, even I could smell her and see her there with you. WOW!!  GREAT read. You say SO much in just a few lines, and I like that. BRAVO!

~ Poets cry with words, not always tears, you see.  ~ PoetSeaMaiden

Thomas119gold
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8 posted 2003-04-30 11:08 AM





Love the comments keep them coming

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