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Thomas119gold
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since 2002-06-03
Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

0 posted 2003-04-29 09:42 AM



A touch of your lips
reminds me of what I miss
the ache in my heart will never forget
for that time is not gone
but only beginning

As I sit hear and write
I can smell that aromatic liquor
as it intoxicates me with thoughts of you
just a drop of it brings me closer
and your Golden hair plays in my mind
as you sit in the surf

a lady with no fear
your words were sad
but still caused me to feel
love for your poems

never has someone stirred
these feelings the way you can
I want of you
and need you to say my name

I am a lost man
lost in a dream
and you are the angel
I hear sing

[This message has been edited by Thomas119gold (04-29-2003 09:43 AM).]

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Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
1 posted 2003-04-29 09:57 AM


Dang....I like what this reminds me of!!!!
Enjoyed!!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
U.S.A.
2 posted 2003-04-29 10:08 PM


thoughts of a nice write

It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you.

poetSeaMaiden
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since 2003-04-25
Posts 107

3 posted 2003-04-29 10:46 PM


*big sighs* Oh boy...yep, I've been lost in that dream a time or two myself. This is SO beautifully sad - and I LOVE the way you ended it, those last lines really complete this whole feeling. I think I'm fast becoming a fan of your work! FABULOUS!

~ Poets cry with words, not always tears, you see.  ~ PoetSeaMaiden

Patricia
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since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160
Missouri
4 posted 2003-04-29 11:41 PM


A beautiful release of your heart.

-Patricia

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