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vlraynes
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0 posted 2003-04-28 07:37 PM




~*One Tiny Raindrop*~

Out beamish cloud a raindrop fell
So gently, only cloud could tell
And just as softly came to rest
Upon the bareness of your chest

Once there it paused in soft recall
Of moments held in lover's thrall
As sweetly as the morning dew
A raindrop fell from me to you

~vlraynes




"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

[This message has been edited by vlraynes (04-28-2003 07:39 PM).]

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Startime55
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1 posted 2003-04-28 07:41 PM


Oh my gosh this poem is so softly wonderful...a tear gathered in my eye as I felt the gentleness of this single raindrop...BRAVO!!!

Justbleu
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2 posted 2003-04-28 08:34 PM


The sweetness of a raindrop....Very nice!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


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3 posted 2003-04-28 09:14 PM


Sheesh! this is a refreshing POV!
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4 posted 2003-04-28 09:28 PM


Oh ... S'Perfect~

LOVE that title~

And is there a hidden message here ?
Well, think I'll just look 'under the covers'~

Love you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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5 posted 2003-04-28 09:32 PM


This is just perfect. Love it. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

dgvarner
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6 posted 2003-04-28 09:45 PM


*chills*....

I LOVE that....very cool...  

hugs, g

"If you suppress laughter, it goes down and spreads out your hips."- Steve Allen

kayjay
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7 posted 2003-04-28 10:14 PM


You've a wonderful story so tightly written, but is your teardrop one of joy or regret?  
Very nice to read you.  Ken J

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

wranx
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8 posted 2003-04-28 10:17 PM


Damn!, Vicky

A beauty

dgvarner
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9 posted 2003-04-28 10:21 PM


OH OH!!  let me answer KAYJAY before I go to bed....
this is a JOYOUS TEAR!!!  

     my heart does a happy jig on this note.....   how happy I am for you my friend...I just had to read this again...I'm going to bed now... !

lv,g

"If you suppress laughter, it goes down and spreads out your hips."- Steve Allen

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10 posted 2003-04-28 11:52 PM


*smiles*
hehehe Vicky you're so cute

Life may be hard, but it's your attitude that determines your happieness

Bill Charles
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11 posted 2003-04-29 12:13 PM


vlraynes - very tender you write of this raindrop...

BC

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12 posted 2003-04-29 04:10 AM


heavenly!
Margherita
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13 posted 2003-04-29 04:15 AM


Quite a special raindrop! Very lovely!
Margherita

GG
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14 posted 2003-04-29 04:18 AM


this is tender, beautiful, its perfect!
wow, it really is!

Always, Alyssa

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     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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15 posted 2003-04-29 10:18 AM


Vicky, this is just stunning work!  I loved it.  Hugs.
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16 posted 2003-04-29 10:28 AM


Very beautiful indeed - you took one little moment, and made a lovely story from it...

It was like time was standing still as I read it. WOW...breathtaking!

~ Poets cry with words, not always tears, you see.  ~ PoetSeaMaiden

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17 posted 2003-04-29 10:34 AM


nice
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18 posted 2003-04-29 12:13 PM



Tiny...is good...

small gifts
small packages
holding the greatest joy...

yes, my dear, tiny is extraordinary....

as is this.  

regards2you
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19 posted 2003-04-29 12:17 PM




Vickey,

I love the concept here. And your skillful writing ability.

Enjoy your poetry a great deal.


Hugs, Pat


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        "Desiderata"

junemac
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20 posted 2003-04-29 12:25 PM


this is so tender and beautiful. it melts one to read it.

excellent.
hugs from june x

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21 posted 2003-04-29 01:03 PM


Oh Vicky!!  What a joy filled read!
Love this..into the library with it!!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

NewEnglandlazurlu
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22 posted 2003-04-29 01:32 PM


Vicky you write like an angel and I always look forward to reading your poems.

'As sweetly as the morning dew
A raindrop fell from me to you'


Awwww!  Hugs and Smiles, Marti

Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts.  A.Einstein

ThisDiamond
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23 posted 2003-04-29 01:49 PM


Ya know woman...
The tiny sparkle of this little beauty graced the dew of morn just right.
Smiles from TD

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24 posted 2003-04-29 07:52 PM






(smiles) Oh Vicky, this is soooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I dream ever so much to make my dream girl in the future cry in joy just as the thought of her makes me cry and the sentimental feeling always touches my heart! (kiss on cheek) This is precious, sweet friend, may you and your love always find precious memories to cherish forever, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vicky, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

Nan
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25 posted 2003-04-30 01:17 PM


...I'm dancing a happy dance here too...
This is wonderful, Vicky

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26 posted 2003-04-30 02:01 PM


WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!! This is so wonderfully written! It's short and it's so sweet!!!

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

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27 posted 2003-05-05 11:27 PM


...Just so beautiful!

Melissa~

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Richy
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28 posted 2003-05-06 01:50 AM




What an amazing poem!!

Absolutely wonderful!!!


Richy



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29 posted 2003-05-07 02:33 AM


BRAVO, love the way you write.......and I think I will keep this tiny raindrop in my library

((hugs))
Charisma

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