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Precious Influence
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Precious Influence |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
By feel, every fold in your thoughts A persuasion of life force by daydreams or sleep As I tumble… In the familiar of lifelines, in being Tugged between shadows and shimmer As I fall… By feel, every ache to distraction bears your image A percussion as resistance unlatches in fine lines As I settle… These depths, every fold, as you reside within me Tangled by heart into warm waters sweet perception As I call… Ours has not been loved before Copyright Kkh 4/27/03 |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Simply beautiful. Eric |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes K. this is a very beautiful poem. A diverse style, but very nicely done. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Just lovely, Kathleen. Beautifully penned.  Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
TD...Love this...the intensity of feeling, the form. You write gems...every time! |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Yes, quite beautiful!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Kathleen, Yes, Martie said it well... intensity... I feel it as I read in almost a physical sense were that possible.... I love the powerful flow of it... Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
simply beautiful |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Kathleen, oh my, this is exquisite. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Marvellous -- just marvellous. So glad I stopped to read this. You really brought me along. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
There is much to be felt between the folds, and you do that feeling justice TD~ I do so love the way you write... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
ThisDiamond - you write with a unique style, becoming it is... BC |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
tumbling, falling, settling, calling...what a journey! |
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