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Elapsed in Time
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Elapsed in Time |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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I rode the trail in warmth of sun, watched the shadows play before. A silhouette had joined my side and whispered thoughts of learning more. And so, I entertained his words with answers mine, returned in smiles. It wasn't long before we reached a length of trail, marked ten, of miles. The breeze of riding kept me cool, while ease of talk made time fly by. We stopped by stream to catch our breath and laughed when joking in reply. Today I found the calm within, enjoyed expressions reaching out. Tomorrow is another day, another ride, another route. Tonight I go to poet's read exercising my thoughts in rhyme, hoping that they'll understand the heart of me, elapsed in time. "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (04-28-2003 06:37 PM).] |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This is really nice...... HUGS, Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Bridgette *s M |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
BRAVO!!!Your words took me on a trip of wonder with you and put a smile of joy on my face....I love the FEEL of this poem... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you...I was sort of uplifted yesterday. The weather was perfect for a bike ride along the old railroad bed. ~smiles M |
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