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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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wish I had the time to relish the moments that hasten by between break of dawn and sunrise between sunset and nightfall and savour the music of joy that springs out in small measures when the moon drops silver curtains when stars blink their merry ways why do all things beautiful be so difficult to enjoy? why do all the simple things be so difficult to achieve? after all, is love not just a simple spark that lights up dark corridors of the lovers’ craving souls? and if it is indeed that candle that gives eternal light and warmth why do bodies then spurn the boon? and why O why do I circle back to the same twisted questions time after time, yet another time? yet again? bleeding my heart for lack of light or maybe just for lack of height |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Sudhir, This is wonderful both for imagery and intent.. So many lines I like, these for instance: "When the moon drops silver curtains When the stars blink their merry ways" Pure poetry...an enjoyable read. Hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Sudhir friend, There are many questions within your introspection. And all strike a universal chord (at least in this particular community). But, you've stated it as well as any, better than most, and.....gently. "and if it is indeed that candle that gives eternal light and warmth why do bodies then spurn the boon?" |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sudhir... your writing has grown, my friend... it's good to see that the many years you have been here are put to better use, each and every day you share with us... and thank you for that! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Beautiful piece of writing |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir, Well done enjoyed the read. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
good Q's that spark the imagination "is love not just a simple spark that lights up dark corridors of the lovers’ craving souls?" |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
There are some lovely lines and questions in your write. I enjoyed it very much. Ken J Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sudhir - your writings have always been filled with emotion. Many thoughts said here... BC |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Sudhir~ This is so elegantly written.. I especially liked what you said about circling back, time after time.. Thank you for fluffing my heart with your gentle words that have touched me so softly. lovely this is~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is a wonderful struggle...the time...the effort...the examination...it's only then that change is welcome...how easy it is to sit and watch and reflect, and how tiring that can become...it's time for a change...yes! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
thank you, THANK you, thank YOU all... so very much regards sudhir |
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