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poetSeaMaiden
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0 posted 2003-04-27 08:05 PM



~ Mermaid Love ~


Alone in the waters, she’s destined to be
Forever without him - this mermaid at sea.
She loves from afar, sees him there on the land
He knows not of her, nor would he understand…

She is beautifully strange, an angel so rare
Never touched by a man, just the tides, salty air.
Alone in her watery world, vast and deep
She dreams of his love, both awake & asleep…

Gentle waves that caress her - she pretends, his embrace
She closes her eyes and imagines his face
Bending slowly to kiss her, fingers run through her hair
It’s a dream though, she knows he will never be there…

She dreams of the chance to touch his soft lips
She closes her eyes, feels his warm fingertips
Tracing softly her face, her brow and her hair -
If their eyes were to meet, could she speak - would she dare?

A sweet sigh from her lips, as her head bows in pain
Tears roll down her cheeks, like a soft salty rain.
She loves from afar, she’s destined to be
Forever without him - this mermaid at sea…


~ poetSeaMaiden

~ Poets cry with words, not always tears, you see.  ~ PoetSeaMaiden

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QjQ
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1 posted 2003-04-27 09:26 PM


All i can say is WoW"  what a touching write of poetry!!  

"It matters not how you answer, It matters only if i hear you"

MikeFessel
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2 posted 2003-04-28 03:32 AM


PoetSeaMaiden,
Oh this is certainly my favorite poem of yours now. This is so good. I love your work! Poor angel, doesn't she see how beautiful she is, how lucky anyone would be to have her?

Sigh...You continue to amaze me.        
              Mike

Ericc
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3 posted 2003-04-28 07:57 AM


Wow...very lyrical and full of beautiful imagry!
Eric

catalinamoon
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4 posted 2003-04-28 10:30 AM


Hi,have to tell you this is one of my favorite themes, and you just did it so beautifully.
Thanks
Sandra

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