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sperarifraai
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0 posted 2003-04-27 07:32 PM


Empty, hopeless, my loved ones are dying
Invisible tears haunt my face
Salt water comes too quickly
A lonely, nightmare riddled, memory lamented isolation I face
As the ice snow prevails thick around my soul
Winter’s grasp freezes leafs that once belonged now bound to shatter into anomaly alone
To spend the rest of my life a crumbling being
The stars at this night are not quite so sharp as to cut my skin
Around me a world attempting to outdo itself with gaudy idealism
So much effort for so little love
The angel I seek swept away with the wind on a dusky evening
She disappeared as her hand fell through mine to become sparse air, a nothing
I call out…….. and I remain calling to this day

Sperari

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1 posted 2003-04-27 09:28 PM


This is a absolute write, i enjoyied it very much

"It matters not how you answer, It matters only if i hear you"

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Georgia
2 posted 2003-04-28 01:33 PM


awesome!
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Gaia
3 posted 2003-04-28 01:39 PM


oh, I must come back to this one again..it is eerily magical
into my library to ponder some more

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