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Tears in my Shower
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Tears in my Shower |
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poetSeaMaiden Member
since 2003-04-25
Posts 107 |
~ Tears in my Shower ~ I jump in the shower - it’s a good place to hide - Tears in my eyes, welling up from inside… They fall, mixed with torrents of water so strong - They wash down the drain, it is where they belong. It’s a good place to cry, so that no one will see - In a steaming hot shower, there’s no one but me… You can cry but it’s like you’re not crying at all - Water with tears… Tears with water - They fall. They fall Mixed with torrents of water so strong - They wash down the drain It is where they belong… *Poets cry with words, not always tears, you see. ~ PoetSeaMaiden |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
this is a fabulous write of poetry, very very good thoughts written. "It matters not how you answer, It matters only if i hear you" |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Very powerful and tender at the same time. Beautiful. Eric |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Enjoyed this. I suspect many have cried in the shower at least once in their lives. I have, and the wash of the warm water seems healing in itself. Hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Crying in the shower always made me feel so helpless and hopeless. I hope this doesn't make you feel the same way. I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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