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Since The Rain Drops Fell
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Since The Rain Drops Fell |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Beneath the rain, the fresh scent of washed anew comes softly through. Just like the rainfall that has saturated our love with a cleansing, a freshness that makes me ever true and makes you a better you. Beneath the rain, the cleansing waters of you and I have washed away the questions of why and have brought us a fresh, new day. Just like the rain drops that soak us through allowing our love to soar on high, giving our hearts the wings to fly. You and I are beneath the rain, are in its spell, since those drops of rain have touched our hearts...and fell. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Ivy Rose, I like this. So very true. I was just reading some old notes and mottos and such and though I did not write the following, I like it a lot and it reminds me of your poem: ...if you want the rainbow you have to pass through the rain... Enjoyed, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
how beautiful  refreshing, tender and cool |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Nice writing....I enjoyed!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
IvyRose~ I always find a thought that stays with me when I read you~ This - 'makes me ever true' is just soooooooo lovely~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ivy Rose Well done, enjoyed. |
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poetSeaMaiden Member
since 2003-04-25
Posts 107 |
I really like the rhymning pattern you used with this - it's so perfect, and not too simple that it sounds like a nursery rhyme. Lovely, lovely read! ~ Poets cry with words, not always tears, you see. ~ PoetSeaMaiden |
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