Open Poetry #26 |
Pickles and Purple Chili |
Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
Pirates at Playgrounds don't tiP, Intellectual children that play with Iguanas that eat purple chil(i). Chicken nuggets, and the Cherrry kool-aid chiC, Kites being flown by kangaroos that kicK. Little children disappear, Lost in a paralleL. Evergreen trees of a Elephant employeE Some how the childrenthat can See, cry near the SeashellS. (¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨) ·.¸(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ *`·.¸.·´* Love Always, Marrie I TAWT I TAW a puddy CAT! [This message has been edited by Kellie_Cantrell (04-26-2003 10:56 PM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kellie, this is really neat. I like the way you have "pickles" spelled at the beginning, middle, and the ending. That's rally good work. Hugs, Ethel |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
Ethel- Thanks (¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨) |
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peaceful_dreamer Member
since 2003-04-25
Posts 159SoMeWhErE oVeR tHe RaInBoW |
this is a really good poem. I like how you spelled out "pickles" where you did. that must of took a lot of work to get it right! i admire your talent! peaceful_dreamer |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
No, I worked the poem from bottom up, I put in the words that had the letters in first and then filled in the rest. Thanks (¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨) |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
very interesting style here. Enjoyed something different from my normal tastes. You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
Thanks, sometimes I have to write on what my mood is like, at this time my mind was in chaos mode. as you can tell. Love, |
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