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Wind
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0 posted 2003-04-26 08:50 PM



Screams-
who screams?
urban wolves roam blacktop streets,
with a thirst for flesh-
a thirst for blood

stone torn from stone
ten don't look the same,
for one fate is undecided,
another cast in stone,
how it stings,
salt in my wound,
to see them-
disapeir
with writing on the walls,
all that was left of those

broken lines

cut short

Never be normal!

© Copyright 2003 Liz - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2003-04-26 09:05 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Liz, I think we all feel like we are being held by the puppet master with strings attached but when we discover the stark reality we are really more free than we think and that takes much weight off our shoulders! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Liz, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

      
Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

Aenimal
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2 posted 2003-04-27 02:06 AM


Liz I think you're one of the more brilliant and tragically overlooked writers on this board. Excellent write!
littlewing
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3 posted 2003-04-27 02:23 AM


Liz:

I agree with Raph
glad to see you in Open more

This write reminds me of my city
how they drop like flies . . .

amazing xxoo

[This message has been edited by littlewing (04-27-2003 04:28 AM).]

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4 posted 2003-04-28 10:30 PM


writing on the walls,
all that was left of those

broken lines

I liked this alot!!

Nicely done windy woman!

Aenimal
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5 posted 2003-05-01 03:00 PM


Bump...because this should be read
Brad Majors
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6 posted 2003-05-01 03:48 PM


I love this piece! Thanks for posting it!
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7 posted 2003-05-01 03:52 PM


Sweet Wind....how did I manage to miss this one first time round? Very deep and well written piece. hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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8 posted 2003-05-01 06:52 PM


enjoyed
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9 posted 2003-05-19 06:22 PM


love ya liz. went hunting for some recent wind wonders and found this. you never disappoint. it's hard hitting stuff lady, and i like it.

much love, gemma xxxxxxx

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10 posted 2003-05-19 08:15 PM


Hi little Liz.....
I hope all is well with you.
I'm sorry that I didn't see this earlier.
I'm glad that I did now.
This is a very good poem .  
Hugs,
Ethel

Wind
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11 posted 2003-06-25 02:04 PM


You guys made me cry.

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

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