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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
This...this is enough. The meeting of our breath...so full with the taste of our desires. This - The hunger of our gaze. This - The movements to a touch...the stir of our fingers and the give to the air between us. This is enough. And then you do... This. Suddenly...this...is even more. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Eric, this is lovely, sweet friend, it is always enough as long as both keep singing! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is precious, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"This - The movements to a touch...the stir of our fingers and the give to the air between us. This is enough. And then you do... This. Suddenly...this...is even more." THIS Is wonderful!! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
"This" is so lovely. I am longing too...longing for "this" today. I love your writing! You convinced that "this" is truly possible. -Patricia |
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poetSeaMaiden Member
since 2003-04-25
Posts 107 |
Well geez - "This" is so wonderfully erotic in a very romantic sort of way if that makes sense! I sat here and had to catch my breath myself! Woweee, what a great way to start my reads for the day! Simply perfect! |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
passionate and romantic, simply wonderful xxx june xxx |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
THIS ... is pure magic ... when each other's gaze of hunger touch there is an explosion of beauty, an intake of breath and .... THIS can well be enough ... .... and in one precious moment perfection unfolds ...not measurable! Love, Margherita |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ericc: smiling at THIS beautiful again as always xxoo |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
Let this show that if anyone thinks there is a limit to beauty... ...within you, there is always more. Thank you. I love you, Moca |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Beautiful,sensitive and sensual is "This" I love it. Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Beautiful I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Finding this is finding life. Lucky is the man who finds it, and blessed is the man who keeps it. Well done -- an excellent excursion into a man's emotional backdrop. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
What a wonderful talent you are! I look forward to reading more of your poems... Richy |
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