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Open Poetry #26

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eminor_angel
Member

since 2003-05-22

Posts 323
Canada

0 posted 2003-06-02 06:09 PM

This is in memory of everyone who has been abused or abandoned by my church in its darker days
Heretic

See how she marches to the edge

Her eyes closed - she cannot see
Her hands tied - she cannot touch
Her feet watched - she cannot run
Her heart bleeding - but she feels

All in God’s name

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2003-06-02 06:16 PM

A powerful piece...no matter what the church, many have made this walk through time...in one circumstance or another.
TD

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

2 posted 2003-06-02 06:45 PM

Amen, brother!

Poe_Pot_Pie
Member

since 2003-06-01

Posts 107
Canada

3 posted 2003-06-02 07:04 PM

Icebox, I think eminor_angel is a sister. So it should be "amen sister".

No offense, but you must be gender conscience! tsk tsk!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2003-06-02 07:12 PM

Nice writing...James

22NICK22
Member

since 2003-05-29

Posts 54

5 posted 2003-06-02 07:47 PM

IT WAS PRETTY GOOD

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-06-03 03:15 AM

very powerful write, what a message!

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

7 posted 2003-06-04 03:36 AM

Powerful write just as the others have mentioned.
Do some people deserve such discipline? I think some really do but many don't

The best teachers have the biggest ears

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