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QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
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0 posted 2003-04-26 10:28 AM


Will You

We have entered into a dimension of a new
feelings and hopes. We had dreamed and
had fantasy's of what it would we would be
feeling at this time. Our hearts now beat
to a different rhythm, our eyes sparkle when
we meet, A warm feeling enters our bodies
that we had not experienced in the past. Oh
how we love the tingles that electrifies us as
we embrace each other, when we hold hands,
hug, or just a soft touch sends signals of love
into our hearts. For we have entered into the
dimension of a bond for life, will you be my?



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littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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1 posted 2003-04-26 10:35 AM


Q:

love you how leave the love to wonder
nice write xxoo

Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667
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2 posted 2003-04-26 11:47 PM


this is neat, and it is full of things that make me wonder, and think.

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  ·.¸(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´
     *`·.¸.·´*

Love Always,
Marrie

I TAWT I TAW a puddy CAT!

carol
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since 2003-01-25
Posts 624
Florida USA
3 posted 2003-04-26 11:52 PM


QjQ, I love it this part was really great
A warm feeling enters our bodies
that we had not experienced in the past. Oh
how we love the tingles that electrifies us as
we embrace each other, when we hold hands,
hug, or just a soft touch sends signals of love
into our hearts
Very good work

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
4 posted 2003-04-27 10:30 AM


Very nice....
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


Startime55
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since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada
5 posted 2003-04-27 10:34 AM


Beautiful....a new dimension where love can grow....This is a wonderful poem that reflects the feelings of your heart....BRAVO!!!

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