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SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2003-04-26 12:04 PM


Forever Mine
~ By Sue ~

I finally find me a house
Then my job decides to shut down
I will not ask what else can go wrong
Just as sure as I do, something will

I moved some boxes in my car
You can not get too many in one so small
It will take me forever going this route
Frustration fills me so much inside

The boxes were so heavy to move
My body is aching from lifting them
I had to move them all alone
Eventually I will be through

Then I will never have to move again
My flowers will be planted too
Yellow roses for all my friends
And some tulips of so many colors

The bird feeders will be hung
My feathered friends will visit me
For me to enjoy the watching them
And sweet melody they will sing

I will be so contented from then on
Once again I will feel relaxed
While making plans for my new house
A place that will forever be mine to keep

4-25-03


[This message has been edited by SmartChick (04-26-2003 12:09 AM).]

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1 posted 2003-04-26 12:12 PM


a very nice write!!  thanks for yuor thoughts

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JamesMichael
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2 posted 2003-04-26 07:33 AM


Hope good things happen for you...James
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3 posted 2003-04-26 09:33 AM


SweetSuzieQ~
Congrats on the new home !

Phooie on the job loss~

Keep your head up .... one day at a time !
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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littlewing
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4 posted 2003-04-26 10:23 AM


Sue:

I am so proud of you!

Soon - I will be in your place

Good Luck and be proud of you
xxoo

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5 posted 2003-04-26 09:54 PM




(smiles) Oh Sue, we are all happy for you, sweet friend, this is wonderful news and I wish for this new place to bring you great joy and comfort forever! (kiss on cheek) Yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

      
Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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just out of reach
6 posted 2003-04-26 10:53 PM


Sue, This is such a trying time for you, but also an exciting one with your new home. Everything will be just fine. Keep your chin up and smile! hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

Earth Angel
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7 posted 2003-04-26 11:08 PM


Sweet Sue! Congratulations on your new home, but the loss of your job sure threw a monkey wrench into the scheme of things.
Well, you do know deep down in your heart that things will work out job-wise. The Universe wouldn't help you come so far and then abandon you. It must have something even better in store for you! Keep the faith--and I'll keep praying for you!

Lovin' hugs,
Linda

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8 posted 2003-04-27 06:49 AM


Hello Sue,
Congratulations on all that you have achieved in this major turning point in your life.   Your pride in such achievement should shine through and boost your self confidence (which had been so abused in the past!) to a new high, which will enable you to cope well with those new job interviews that loom on your horizon.
Sunnyone and I send you all our love and prayers.
Music Maker John & Sunny

Sunnyone
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9 posted 2003-04-27 06:56 AM


Oh Sue, I am delighted for you, because I know how much this means to you!  And don't worry about the job, as those things always have a way of working out.  The main thing is that you have your own place, YOURS, and that is so very wonderful!!  Plant a lilac bush for me, would you??  I might just pop over the big pond one of these days to pick some lilacs in your front yard!!!  I echo John's best wishes, my friend!!!  

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

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10 posted 2003-04-28 10:54 AM


enjoyed
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