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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

0 posted 2003-04-25 09:52 PM

In a single second you moved me closer
taking me back to the beginning
playing the footage from reel to real
fast forwarding to where we left off.

Shifting in my seat, uneasy being in the same room
I want nothing more than to lay my head in your arms
but can we ever go back and love that way again
would we survive a second time.

Or are we forever held in the pause
of a true story that never came to an end
pleasantly warmed by a lovers touch
swept up by the wind that carried us.

Our hearts trembling in reverse
as the summer stirs the grass
I long to view the vistas from every avenue
setting the scene, and make it come alive.

Capturing you in the moment
watching the movie from beginning to end
to better understand
the meaning of our love in the making.

~*~

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

1 posted 2003-04-25 10:14 PM

Doggone! Your writing seems to have taken another large step forward.

Your pen is in a good place.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2003-04-25 10:19 PM

Smiling...

So much to treasure in this vision...
Couldn't pick a single line, for they all blend on the page in such a tender recipe.
TD

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2003-04-25 10:34 PM

(sigh) Oh Lori, this is beautiful, sweet friend, how wonderful it would be if we could see the memories like movies and fast-forward all we could! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

4 posted 2003-04-25 11:19 PM

Ah, Lori,

This is beautiful..such contemplation..heart touching with such reality...

Enjoyed, Hugs Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

5 posted 2003-04-25 11:29 PM

'Shifting in my seat, uneasy being in the same room
I want nothing more than to lay my head in your arms
but can we ever go back and love that way again
would we survive a second time.

Or are we forever held in the pause
of a true story that never came to an end
pleasantly warmed by a lovers touch
swept up by the wind that carried us.'

Great verses Lori! Was thinking about something much like this earlier. You nailed it...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2003-04-25 11:30 PM

Amazing write Lori.
Your writing has taken on a different touch..
Much enjoyed...love this as I can relate to it.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2003-04-26 01:29 PM

that's strange how you can write things I feel and think, certain things that happen...I could have written this but never as well.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2003-04-26 03:33 PM

Enjoyed..James

poetSeaMaiden
Member

since 2003-04-25

Posts 107

9 posted 2003-04-26 05:43 PM

Oooohhh I just loved the line, "our hearts trembing in reverse..." *sigh*

I just don't even know what to say except this was a wonderful read, and I've been there, felt that. Beautiful, beautiful read!

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

10 posted 2003-04-27 06:15 AM

Bluesy:

and you say that I have momentum
I just rode a rollercoaster up there
beautiful - saddening but lovely
xxoo tweets

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

11 posted 2003-04-27 09:40 AM

What a beautiful still-life! You have a gift for capturing moments and letting us view them from every possible angle....

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______________Ratleader______________

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

12 posted 2003-04-27 09:56 AM

There you go...I am now in full thought about him again. In fact, so much so, that I feel a writing welling up in my soul. You have inspired me!

-Patricia

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

13 posted 2003-04-27 09:24 PM

Thanks wranx, that's a fine compliment, especially coming from you

TD~ What a nice thing to say, I'm a sucker when it comes to love stories.

Noah~ Memories are like movies, yes!  Thank you.

Pat~ Methinks I contemplate too much.  Reality is what it is though.
Thank you for the beautiful!

Duncan~ I figured I was not the only one, we may be
unique in our own right, but there are parallels in every human situation.

Nancy~ Thank you for your gracious reply..we've all had our share of heart aches, sometimes just knowing we are not alone helps to ease our pain.

Dixie~ I thank you for that, your writing feels the same way to me.
Hugs~

Thank you James Michael~

Seamaiden~ I too can relate so well to what you write~
Thanks, I'm glad you're here.

Well, maybe we can go back again after all,
I'll hold onto my ticket just in case!  Thanks tweets~

Ed~ Still life?  Hmmm, I like that. Thank you for enjoying the view,
I appreciate you.

Hi Patricia~ Inspiration is a good thing, I like to think it's part of
the reason we are here.  Thank you so much for reading.

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