Of my Serenity......repost for Marge

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Martie

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0 posted 2003-04-25 09:00 PM

Of My Serenity

Within a fire burning low
upon a meadow I have known
the ember’s spark that takes twilight
like fireflies into the night

All around in shadowed tell
the sound of crickets cast a spell
across the hill’s the sound respires
where moon has made her own empire

The inn with bed pine canopy
snuggled with just my sanity
this place brings indigo insight
into the searching of life’s fight

I go into the summer’s day
just knowing that at night I’ll lay
within the dream I build for me
the campfire of my serenity

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2003-04-25 09:03 PM

MartieSis~
You do it ALL JUST RIGHT ....
and at JUST THE RIGHT TIME~

I needed a taste of the campfire of serenity~
Thank you dearest one~
*HUGLETS*
~*Marge/Sis*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

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Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-04-25 09:09 PM

I go into the summer’s day
just knowing that at night I’ll lay
within the dream I build for me
the campfire of my serenity

Now that's dreaming sweet dreams, isn't it?
Thanks for sharing anither piece of your
heart, dear friend.

Hugs,
Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (04-25-2003 09:10 PM).]

Ratleader

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3 posted 2003-04-26 10:58 AM

Gentlemen, the women of this world are so far ahead of us, it's time to either evolve, or emigrate............

But a nice piece, Martie....thanks for bringing it back.

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Startime55
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4 posted 2003-04-26 01:17 PM

BRAVO!!!! I am so glad you reposted it so that I could get lost in its beauty....Magnificent...I Love it...

Local Parasite

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Transylconia, Winnipeg

5 posted 2003-04-26 06:40 PM

Oh cool... I should really read more of your work, Martie, 'cause for a minute I thought you were solid free-verse. This is really nice work, the formatting didn't take anything away from your innate skill and talent, and the mastery with which your imagination becomes manifest in verse...

Just incredible work...

Parasite

God becomes as
we are that we
may be as he
is
~William Blake

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Canada eh.

6 posted 2003-04-26 07:02 PM

Exquisitely beautiful Martie...
Beyond compare as always.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Auguste

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By the sea

7 posted 2003-04-26 07:40 PM

I love it when you rhyme. This is truly beautiful, Martie. I love it! Hugs

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn

Magnus

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South Carolina, USA

8 posted 2003-04-26 07:43 PM

Very beautiful Martie, the serenity of it
comes through wonderfully.

Goodknight
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Ohio, USA

9 posted 2003-04-30 08:34 PM

loved the serenity you paint and wash over me with this poem - Paul

regards2you
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California

10 posted 2003-04-30 08:40 PM

Martie,

Wonderful. I so enjoyed rereading it, it takes two to three not to understand but just the joy of breathing in the serenity woven.

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

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