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scorpio
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0 posted 2003-04-25 07:54 PM



I'm Right Here
(Inspired by Nightshade)

I love you more than words can say
With a love so deep and true.
I try with kiss and touch to convey
How very much I do love you.

When you have pain of past trials
My heart works to ease the memories.
I live to bring to you the smiles
And help to think of past glories.

So, let me wipe away those tears
And love you for the rest of our years.




believe in what your heart feels...

[This message has been edited by scorpio (04-25-2003 07:57 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-04-25 08:09 PM


Awwwww scorpio!! This is so pretty and so much the way I know that he feels. Thankyou for this and I am glad that my poem inspired you. hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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2 posted 2003-04-25 08:29 PM




(smiles) This is beautiful, sweet friend, you are a very devoted soul who will make your love very happy forever! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I think Chris's words inspire us all just as yours do, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Scorpio, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

      
Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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3 posted 2003-04-25 08:38 PM


Beautiful piece. It can be so hard to love again. very well done like this alot

Julie

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4 posted 2003-04-25 10:35 PM


Beautiful dear Scorpio!
Your love is very lucky to have one as devoted as you.
I'm sure she feels very loved and treasured.
It is wonderful to be inspired by another's work here at Passions.
I see it as one of the highest compliments.
Good to see that Nightshade's post inspired you tonight.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

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5 posted 2003-04-25 10:38 PM


This is just so sweet.

~Liz

Waited on a line of greens and blues, just to be the next to be with you..
~Mr. Big

scorpio
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6 posted 2003-04-25 11:00 PM


Chris, your poem struck a chord with me..and I thank you for the inspiration..

Thanks Noah...I try very hard to bring smiles to my love..

Whiskey, thank you for your warm words..

Nancy, thank you for your wonderful reply...yes she is loved and treasured...I just hope she will continue to believe in me...

Thank you, Skyshine...I appreciate your comments..

believe in what your heart feels...

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7 posted 2003-04-26 08:28 AM


....bump!
littlewing
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8 posted 2003-04-26 10:32 AM


scorpio:

and what an inspiration!

So, let me wipe away those tears
And love you for the rest of our years.

lovely thoughts
xxoo

She will love this . . . xxoo


JamesMichael
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9 posted 2003-04-26 03:35 PM


Enjoyed...James
scorpio
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10 posted 2003-04-26 05:26 PM


Thank you Nancy for the bump...much appreciated..

I'm glad you liked this poem littlewing...thank you for your kind words..

Thank you James...

believe in what your heart feels...

Sunshine
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11 posted 2003-04-28 04:30 PM



To have a familiar poet inspire you
is wonder...
to have a Passions poet inspire you...

is a blessing.

Thank you Scorpio - for reading, replying,
and seeing that which is so important!

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12 posted 2003-04-28 05:05 PM


so tender!
vandana
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13 posted 2003-04-28 05:35 PM


enjoyed
scorpio
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14 posted 2003-04-28 07:13 PM


Thank you Karilea for you comments...I find Pip to be an inspiring place..

Thank you Midnitesun...your support is much appreciated..

Glad you enjoyed this, Vandana..

believe in what your heart feels...

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