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time2shine
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since 2003-04-20
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0 posted 2003-04-25 07:40 PM



In matters of seconds
it can all be gone
but your touch will always be
your mark will always follow
And in darkness
I will claim your love
just as before
when we hid in smooth corridors
and their floors caressed us
our scent forever theirs
We loved then
our souls merged
in unheard fusion
and we remained in heaven
just for a while
wishing silently
that it would never end
but knowing that one day it would
So sad
this passion
that is ours then disappears
only to remain quietly
impregnated in me
like this



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Ericc
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1 posted 2003-04-25 07:44 PM


Beautiful!
Eric

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2 posted 2003-04-25 08:23 PM




Oh my....lovely...what an ending line!

Enjoyed, hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

whiskey
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3 posted 2003-04-25 08:48 PM


Wonderful , Enjoyed very much

Julie

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4 posted 2003-04-25 08:49 PM




(big hugggsssssss) I know this feeling and I pray like how you dream it should that the spark seems to start a faithful fire within! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

      
Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

Justbleu
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5 posted 2003-04-30 12:18 PM


Wow!!!!
Good poem!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


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