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Kissed By A Butterfly
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Kissed By A Butterfly |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 Kissed By A Butterfly By: Noah Eaton 6/27/01 A dream melted into my kaleidoscope bed Ember wings searing away at hoarfrost laments true Persimmon desires ablaze this mysterious beauty Landing to rest upon my dew-kissed jade womb Spring flutters in dance of jocose grace Summer painted in red wingtips, resembling the love we make Autumn's colors basking around me in her presence Winters snowflakes freckle her soft face everyday  Jovial petals reach up to her, wreathing her close Her gentle tongue searching the pistils of my heart she drinks Sipping my nectar, digging depper into my love for her Embraced by a monarch angel, feathered in her wings Now I know dreams are meant to be, miracles can happen Holding true love in a dream's metamorphosis Fluttering in my heart, my love flitters as she titters happily Holding me close, embracing her sweet butterfly kiss...  And that's the most wonderful thing about creating. It will always be a mystery. ***Shakira*** [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (04-25-2003 02:41 PM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
lovely writing Noah *check out the petals(sp)... hugs M |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Your lovely poem springs from your admiration of one of the most ethereal and beautiful creatures the Earth is blessed with ... I love the imagery and the delicacy of your write. Love, Margherita  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
The delicate tendrils of your captivating words reach out and gently wrap themselves about my soul... You truly, truly, truly are a poet--and an artist. Lovin' hugs, EA |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Artist, yes, I think that sum it up nicely. Well done! And now she's in me, always with me, tiny dancer in my hand ~ Bernie Taupin |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Nice write Toe 2 |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Hey must be butterfly week? Martie, me, you - think it is Spring causing this? Nicely done Noah. |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Absolutely positivly no doubt about it this is an AWESOME peice!!!! Your talents are quite amazing, Noah I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Noah, this is positively beautiful my sidekick! The Monarchs are on their way back up here now from their winter in Mexico. They are so very beautiful eh? I love this...hope you don't mind if keep it. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Gentle and colorfull....a beauty of a poem, Noah... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well, this is just what I needed on this fine Spring day! |
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wings of the moon Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 323Pink bubblegum land |
Noah, that was one splendid and beautiful write... I enjoyed reading it... love, Claire "more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you" |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
You colored my dirty grey day, Noah, with your beautiful writing. Thanks. My spirit is coming alive again. -Patricia |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Beautiful poem Noah...I saw a butterfly yesterday...and I knew spring was finally here.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice write |
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