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Just Another Fantasy

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nakdthoughts
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Just Another Fantasy


I woke too late and slept too long,
decisions forced by written tears.
My heart had windows, hazed in dew
invisible, illusion's fears.

Regretting never, feeling's shame,
nor moments spent in tenderness.
Just another fantasy,
a trick of mind to real, suppress.

Unrestrained in world of mind
those fantasies imagine more
than ever could or would entail
in world of real, of heart's explore.

I am no challenge in these dreams
or maybe nightmares ride the stress
of fairy tales, fictitious thoughts
of give and take, no more, no less.

Never poet would I be
if not for life, it's turn around.
I amble reckless, swerve the course,
to stray away from being bound.

Life's a gamble, two hands I've lost,
never good at betting games.
So my rhyme continues on
spinning dreams with empty frames.

Faceless, spirits press me on
pushing here and prodding there.
I stand before the eyes of you
with only poet's words to share.

I've tried to stay my words of rhyme,
for those who feel sometimes they're forced.
But they just flow from want in real
of nothing held when love's divorced.

A fantasy within a dream
of make-believe, a bubble's rise,
staggered fiction on the edge
of tattered romance, behind mind's eyes.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 04-25-2003 02:37 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

GirlFriend~
When you emote ... you do it  B E A U T I M O U S L Y ~

The cadence of this piece is sublime~
*Huglets* from the South~
~*Marge*~

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Tim
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As indicated, nice cadence and flow, good effort, enjoyed the read.
nakdthoughts
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3 posted 04-26-2003 07:02 PM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

thank you Marge and Tim for taking the time to respond to a "Moody Me"

~smiling~
M
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Beautiful "MOODY" thoughts!!!!
Enjoyed!!!!
Bridgette

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I've tried to stay my words of rhyme,
for those who feel sometimes they're forced.
But they just flow from want in real
of nothing held when love's divorced.

Maureen, your words are never forced as they come from your heart. hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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6 posted 04-30-2003 03:25 PM       View Profile for Brad Majors   Email Brad Majors   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Brad Majors

You express your emotions well!
nakdthoughts
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7 posted 05-01-2003 11:11 AM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

Brigette, Chris and Brad...thank you for your kind words.

M
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Very nice...James
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