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QjQ
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0 posted 2003-04-25 12:23 PM


Emotions

Many are disillusioned by conniving incorrigible
others, that believe what they do and say always
is to be received with impeccable reasoning.

For many a relationship, is only for the gratuity
and the amenities, that is available to them.

This being reason for commencing a relationship is
what causes one to become incongruous of another's thoughts.

Therefore causing grief and discouragement within, for them to develop the ongoing relationship with continued emotions for the other.


"It matters not how you answer, It matters only if i hear you"

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1 posted 2003-04-25 12:29 PM


a very interesting write, leaving the reader with much to ponder...
emotionally and intellectually

QjQ
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2 posted 2003-04-25 09:12 PM


thank you >midnitesun<  for your comments on this write.

"It matters not how you answer, It matters only if i hear you"

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3 posted 2003-04-29 09:29 AM


There's a lot here to think about....
Enjoyed!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


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4 posted 2003-05-02 08:37 PM


Whoa, very well put.
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5 posted 2003-05-02 08:53 PM




Well, there will be continued emotions, just what they are may not be printable....

smiling...life is simply too short to get caught up with anyone who is not dancing close to our souls, though we can still try to bridge those gaps that set some of us apart from one another.  Perhaps at another time in life.

Neat poem....it does cause thought....

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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6 posted 2003-05-02 08:58 PM


Interesting, thought provoking write.   I think there are so many people in this world that it would be unnatural for us not to conflict with some of them. So we must find the ones who are kind and honest and treat us with the respect we deserve.

Julie

QjQ
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7 posted 2003-05-02 09:08 PM


thanks everyone!!!

It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you.

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8 posted 2003-05-02 09:29 PM


This is a difficult theme to write about, but you managed it quite well!

Peace, Light & Love,
EA

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