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Thomas119gold
Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

0 posted 2003-04-25 11:56 AM


A tear
drop lands
with a
splash across
her cheek
as she
begs for
her freedom
Love can
only survive
if two
are willing
why waste
your time
chasing dreams
in an
altered reality
Leave her
to her
own accord
and start
living your
life anew
so much
can be
better for
the two
Be man
enough to
build a
new life
and smart
enough to
be true
to the
one in
the mirror

© Copyright 2003 Thomas Goldsworthy - All Rights Reserved
GG
Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532
Lost in thought
1 posted 2003-04-25 12:06 PM


there's a lot of wisdom here.
Alot that I still need to think on... I'll do that now and leave you with a great job.

Always, Alyss

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Kahlil
Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881

2 posted 2003-04-25 10:20 PM


Rough times to go through, but you're right...be true to the one in the mirror...
Kahlil

Justbleu
Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
3 posted 2003-04-29 09:19 AM


Those that know this are rare.....
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


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