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peppermint35
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since 2000-05-28
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0 posted 2003-04-25 02:14 AM



I want to fix you
Fix yourself
I want to cure you
Cure yourself
I want to curse you
Strike you
Smite you
In fury and in pain
How can you?
Why do you?
How dare you?
You don't have the right
It took me too long to make you
You'd throw that all away
I cannot hate you
I love you
But I can't fix you

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
   Percy Bysshe Shelley

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2003-04-25 03:32 PM


So true, though its nice to offer some spare mental glue.

junemac
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since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005
uk
2 posted 2003-04-25 07:45 PM


oh how i recognise that feeling !! i know exactly what you mean.

enjoyed this one, thanks

hugs from june x

A2J
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since 2002-11-22
Posts 43
South Africa
3 posted 2003-04-26 12:22 PM


enjoyed
Bill Charles
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4 posted 2003-04-26 12:38 PM


peppermint35 - so very true, one has to fix themselves I believe...

BC

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