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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-04-25 02:03 AM



Tonight
words would not
escape these lips.
Their confinement, instead
seeps out
in tears.

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-04-25 02:10 AM


yeah, me too...
QjQ
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2 posted 2003-04-25 02:23 AM


touching write!!

"It matters not how you answer, It matters only if i hear you"

EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...
3 posted 2003-04-25 02:46 AM


Always good to read you.

P.S. Love the signature!

And now she's in me, always with me, tiny dancer in my hand ~ Bernie Taupin

garysgirl
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4 posted 2003-04-25 02:50 AM


Maureen, I felt this one.
Hugs,
Ethel

Rick
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5 posted 2003-04-25 09:00 AM


This was very sad, I hope the words will speak again soon and the tears will be of joy, not sorrow. I enjoyed the read.

Sincerely
Rick

Enchantress
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6 posted 2003-04-25 09:02 AM


WOW!!  So much said in so few words!
Well done Maureen.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Opeth
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7 posted 2003-04-25 09:05 AM


"Tonight
words would not
escape these lips.
Their confinement, instead
seeps out
in tears."


~ That is why it is always good to have someone special to share these types of matters with...Much is said in few words here...words that could not escape.


Opeth
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The Ravines
8 posted 2003-04-25 09:06 AM


This poem of yours reminded me of one of my old ones...maybe I will post it.
KoKo
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Inside the shadow's shadow
9 posted 2003-04-25 03:03 PM


This is extremely touching and so powerful. I really enjoyed this

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
10 posted 2003-04-25 03:10 PM


passing shadows,

EagleOne, nice to see you here. Thank you for the visit...and the thoughts on my signature.

Ethel, just one of those nights...and days that follow.

Rick, I am not that good with verbal words anymore. I can remember when I use to be told to speak less and say more...now I can barely do either.

Nancy, I only a few words in me, that made any sense

Opeth, yes it is nice when you have that someone to relate to. Maybe some day...
I responded to yours with a new poem of my own called "Just Another Fantasy".

KoKo,thank you for stopping by and leaving your thoughts.

M

JamesMichael
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11 posted 2003-04-26 07:27 AM


Nice expression...James
littlewing
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12 posted 2003-04-26 10:43 AM


Goodness Maureen . . .
you are reading my mind now - aren't you?
Amazing write in so few thoughts that hold much power . . . xxoo

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
13 posted 2003-04-26 07:22 PM


Thank you JamesM and littlewing.

I guess many of us
have situations in common.
hugs
M

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