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Tim
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0 posted 2003-04-24 11:13 PM


Last night my eyes were heaven bound,
To my suprise no stars were found
Within my view, how can that be?
How can there be no stars to see?
Where was the moon's soft golden glow,
Splendored orb of night's bestow?
It was as if night hid away,
The wonder of its jeweled display.
Then down to earth my gaze was drawn,
I heard a sound across the lawn,
I turned to see you dancing there,
A goddess fair, beyond compare,
Twirling, swirling in the night,
On noiseless feet of elfin sprite,
I stood transfixed in feet of stone,
Amid the night I was alone,
As I espied a beauty rare,
Angelic face and satin hair,
And then I knew why hid the night,
The splendor of it's welkin light,
Terpsichore and Sisters Seven,
On heaven's floor in distant heaven,
Were outshone by earthen glow,
Of your beauty far below,
So ceded night to your exude,
The blinding of your pulchritude,
You shame the jewels of heaven's night,
For you are radiance, my perfect light.


[This message has been edited by Tim (04-24-2003 11:59 PM).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-04-24 11:17 PM


I do not often wish to be another...
but some one starlit night
oh, to be her...

regards2you
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2 posted 2003-04-24 11:22 PM




Oh my...how enjoyable...

I love it..Beautiful!


Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Tim
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3 posted 2003-04-25 11:58 PM


I appreciate the two of you taking the time to read and give such gracious comments to my little ditty.
Justbleu
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4 posted 2003-04-29 09:34 AM


This is very nice.....
Enjoyed it!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


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