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I sometimes wonder
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I sometimes wonder |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
I sometimes wonder where I'd be without the love you give to me I'm thankful more each passing day the path I chose led your way You're the half that makes me whole The burning flame that warms my soul So take my hand let's build a life This heart I give to you... My wife |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nice write!!! "one needs not challenge all the players to win the game" |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Your devotion is heartfelt. Lucky lady I'd say~ |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh, this is lovely! Lucky lady she is I'd say. Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
QjQ- thanks i'm glad you enjoyed Blues- thank you, but i have to disagree...I'm the lucky one Chris- thank you so much |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Oh Eddles you know I love this. Congratulations, sweet heart! And you're wrong...She is extremely lucky! You're the biggest sweet heart I know. ~hugs~ Luv ya, Eddles! I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This is soooooo wonderful..... Enjoyed!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Lost_Soul Junior Member
since 2003-04-17
Posts 37California, United States |
just beautiful. keep up the great writing.  |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Very sweet and sincere gift to your wife... Nicely done... Richy |
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