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whiskey
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0 posted 2003-04-24 10:09 PM


    

Five Years ago today we met
I read about you in the paper
Excited I took my friend to see
Arrived to a strangers house
Inwalked sat chatted
Then brought to me you were
So small and cuddly
The biggest dark brown eyes
Handed to me  
You licked my face
Then promtly asleep on my lap
Your brother a spitting image
Asked which was for me
I chose you
Outwalked the house
With you in arms
Into the car to away
Take you home
Since that day
Joy has filled my life
Having you wagging your tale
Right there by myside
Unconditional love pours out your eyes
So many times you have made
Me Smile, Laugh, and Cry
I could'nt have asked for a more loyal friend
I love you my puppy
Although you cant talk back
I tell you everyday how wonderful you are
I get my reply in cuddles
Which is better than words to me

[This message has been edited by whiskey (04-24-2003 10:11 PM).]

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Kielo
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1 posted 2003-04-24 10:12 PM




I miss my dog... Being the loyal crazy kid that I am, I resent my current dog... my family wanted him. I'm nice to him, but I miss my dog... I'm not ready yet. I love this poem. Its beautiful.

Kielo

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QjQ
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2 posted 2003-04-24 10:12 PM


a very sweet write, i bet that pup is spoiled,  

"one needs not challenge all the players to win the game"

Magnus
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3 posted 2003-04-24 10:13 PM


A special part of our lives...as your own
certainly is...  Thanx for sharing this..

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