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Kellie_Cantrell
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0 posted 2003-04-24 11:19 AM


Started off with a bad attitude,
I always had to be rude.
Smarted off, sassed all around.
got kicked to the ground.

I thought I was better,
looking cool in my green sweater.
Until I got that letter,
from old man Mr. Wetter.

How was it that I was to know,
that the teacher had always said so.
It was my bad attitude,
that always caused me to be rude,
I always got sent to my room.
Where I swept with an old broken broom.


i thought I  was real smart,
maybe i was hit witha dart.
I got stuck in my locker,
Momma had to call the doctor.

(¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨)
  ·.¸(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´
     *`·.¸.·´*
    Love Always
       Kellie

I TAWT I TAW a puddy CAT!

© Copyright 2003 Kellie M. Cantrell - All Rights Reserved
Brad Majors
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1 posted 2003-04-24 11:44 AM


good one!
the_loner_23
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2 posted 2003-04-24 07:39 PM


I know what it is like to get picked on in school. It sucked. Awesome write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

whiskey
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3 posted 2003-04-24 09:37 PM


Very nice, reads like a rap song in my head its never nice to be picked on attitude can change alot in our social lives.

Julie

Kellie_Cantrell
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4 posted 2003-04-26 07:47 PM


Thank You!

(¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨)
  ·.¸(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´
     *`·.¸.·´*

Love Always,
Marrie

I TAWT I TAW a puddy CAT!

Kellie_Cantrell
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5 posted 2003-07-13 03:57 AM


I don't think people really understand this unless they actually experienced the same situation. I just wish someone would have done their job and dealt with it.
babygurl55
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6 posted 2003-07-15 01:48 PM


this was a very good poem. i use to get pick, then i made a mistake and changed so people would like me. then i reliezed how dumb that was. but now i hav etons of friends and everyone knows me. so never change just because people are picking. you poerty is very good. i can't wait to read more!


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