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Kellie_Cantrell
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0 posted 04-24-2003 11:15 AM       View Profile for Kellie_Cantrell   Email Kellie_Cantrell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Kellie_Cantrell

A silouette of darkness,
hides your face.
As if the road had some dampness.
You'll probably lose this race.
          Ever wonder how to catch up,
          to a falling sky.
          put my foot in the stirrup,    
          Let's go for a ride, little guy.
No where to run,
does he have a gun?
Should I pick up the pace,
and head to outer space?
           The darkness lingers inside,
           I'd like to run and hide.
           In fear that I could have already died,
           and then you cried.

(`.) (`.)
  .(`.).
     *`..*
    Love Always
       Kellie

I TAWT I TAW a puddy CAT!

© Copyright 2003 Kellie M. Cantrell - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 04-24-2003 11:43 AM       View Profile for Brad Majors   Email Brad Majors   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Brad Majors

nice!
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2 posted 04-24-2003 01:01 PM       View Profile for Cpat Hair   Email Cpat Hair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cpat Hair

  Ever wonder how to catch up,
          to a falling sky.


love that line...

Sunnyone
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3 posted 04-24-2003 01:30 PM       View Profile for Sunnyone   Email Sunnyone   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunnyone's Home Page   View IP for Sunnyone

'Should I pick up the pace, and head to outer space'...Kellie, that's a great line, and I can't tell you how many times I've wished that I could do just that!!  What a great write!!

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

Kellie_Cantrell
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4 posted 04-26-2003 07:49 PM       View Profile for Kellie_Cantrell   Email Kellie_Cantrell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kellie_Cantrell

Sunnyone- I have been saving that line forever, i finally had the perfect poem for it!
Kellie_Cantrell
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5 posted 07-13-2003 03:56 AM       View Profile for Kellie_Cantrell   Email Kellie_Cantrell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kellie_Cantrell

I've been reading all my poems this morning and revisiting the past a bit and I am learning a lot about myself. I enjoy this.
 
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