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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
In resonance Strings vibrate from touch Rough ridged fingers finding chords Scrape counterpoint In quiet A slide To tones float on ear Each note a cut, Quick to my heart, Let me bleed your music Let me need Bridge keys To unlock this feel Of crazy oh lazy Unknown memory Darken the room And let me sit here in blind With my ears searching each Half noted pick For perfection Play me... Play for me... Again |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Happy to know that I'm not alone in this pastime, the quiet listening to past times |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Good listening, even without the orchestra. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ron...I can feel the emotional pull of the notes you hear, even from this distance. |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
this one haunts....damn thanks a lot Ron...  this one is going to stick awhile and it is still morning the mood rippling barely lit moon |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
As Brian said, it is haunting... An emotional tug of feeling strung up in memory I can hear the music play Enjoyed this Hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Nothing is ever as well played as the encore, seems to hit home more than the whole regular program itself! (big hugggssssss) This is powerful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton And that's the most wonderful thing about creating. It will always be a mystery. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Haunting musical strains that reach into the soul...BRAVO!!!! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
We feel lots of poems in our hearts -- but not many through blistered fingertips. Looking across the room at mine right now, fingers curving on their own.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
This is another in the long line of excellent writes. I thoroughly enjoyed... uh... hmmm..... How in the world did my guitar get here?????? When the morning cries and you don't know why... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
The words, the theme... your work is art, my friend... muchly enjoyed Regards, Sudhir |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Touching write Captain... Sunkissed. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Darken the room And let me sit here in blind With my ears searching each Half noted pick For perfection Play me... Play for me... Again[/b] Hauntingly beautiful, Capt. I enjoyed.  Hugs, Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (04-25-2003 05:53 PM).] |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
'Bridge keys To unlock this feel Of crazy oh lazy Unknown memory Darken the room And let me sit here in blind With my ears searching each Half noted pick For perfection Play me... Play for me... Again' Let me pretend it will not end...one more time. [This message has been edited by Duncan (04-27-2003 03:17 PM).] |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Sensousness awakening, my friend? Cor |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
seductive...and great... Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Beautiful piece of writing |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Always a pleasure to hear you... TD |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
I am with the rest..haunting...reminds me of "Violin" by Anne Rice for some reason!? *shrugs* If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
Sam? |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
To unlock this feel Of crazy oh lazy Unknown memory I often sit in darkened rooms...that is when I have my best thoughts. M |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ron: ahhh . . . this sounds nice . . . I always close my eyes when I am moved by a piece . . . beautiful music you have written xxoo |
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