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tornskirt Member
since 2003-03-30
Posts 87 |
run my hand through my hair i know it's not fair i've had to fight so hard my clothes can't cover you're my lover dreamin' big and singing with your band hand me over tehre see it bare dance a dance and take me to france i hate rhyming it's not orginal i'm a loser ha, not a user i never thought i was better than you get a life dude i created my own never leave the light on if you don't want to be found |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
If you hate rhyme so much, why do you do it? This piece has a certain staccato rhythm that makes it sound like a machine gun, was this your intention? Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Jess: nice to see you out in the open . . . hehe you will learn much here: loved these lines: get a life . . . I have created my own nice job xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (04-24-2003 05:40 PM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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