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Sunnyone
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0 posted 2003-04-24 07:12 AM





Morning spreads it's fingers
'round the circle of our world
Like a blanket, wrapped in hope at each new dawn
A new day with it's chances and adventures lay in wait
And the shadows left from darkness
Now are gone...

The promise of today has softened
Trials of yesterday
Tomorrow is a gift for us to seek
This day is yours to weave into the tapestry of life
And just like you, it's bounties
are unique...

So, open up your morning windows
Watch the day unfold
And welcome every moment yet to come
Your destiny is waiting in a world of your design
A new day dawns, so put it on, and go
Shine like the sun!

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

© Copyright 2003 Sunnyone - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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1 posted 2003-04-24 07:17 AM


Gorgeous picture and WONDERFUL poem! I enjoyed this deeply .... you are so right, everyday offers new possibilities, may we be ready to make our choices!
You shine!
I'll try to shine through this day on the wave of this beautiful poem ...
Love, Margherita

regards2you
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2 posted 2003-04-24 07:51 AM




Sunnyone,

Love the last line as I do the entire poem. Very uplifting.

Enjoyed, Hugs Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Sunnyone
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3 posted 2003-04-24 07:56 AM


Hi Margherita!!  Oh, I'm so glad that you liked this one, as the dawn caught my eye this morning, and this is the result. I wish you a special day today, and lots of sunshine coming your way!!  (and thank you!)
Sunnyone
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4 posted 2003-04-24 07:58 AM


Hi Pat, and thank you so much!!  Even if you live in an overcast place, like mine is this morning, you can still put some brightness into your world, eh?? Nice seeing you here!

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2003-04-24 08:27 AM


Sunnyone
Good thoughts, good write, good read, enjoyed.

Sunshine
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6 posted 2003-04-24 09:00 AM



G'morning Sun-Sis...so true, so true...
shine on!

Earth Angel
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7 posted 2003-04-24 09:01 AM


Dear Sunnyone, you and your radiant poem, both shine like the sun. Glorious writing!

May the sun always shine down upon you and keep your solar panels charged!

Love & Hugs,
Linda

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (04-24-2003 09:02 AM).]

Bill Charles
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8 posted 2003-04-24 10:27 AM


Sunny - an uplifting write this morning, a pleasure to read...

BC

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9 posted 2003-04-24 11:28 AM


This is beautiful!! The sun is shining here, the birds are chirping...flowers are blooming...ain't life grand?!! hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

KristieSue
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10 posted 2003-04-24 11:34 AM


Your destiny is waiting in a world of your design
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Gosh, I love this!!!  especially that line above :-)

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

OLIAS
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11 posted 2003-04-24 11:41 AM


Wonderful words of hope for a fresh faced new day, thank you for posting.

Regards,
Olias

Brad Majors
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12 posted 2003-04-24 11:48 AM


don't see you around much but when I do you never cease to amaze me!
Sunnyone
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13 posted 2003-04-24 12:46 PM


Hi Sy!! Always a pleasure to receive your thoughts in reply...thank you, dear friend!

Hi Sun-sis, and you already know how to shine! You brighten up our days here and make us all smile!  Thank you!

Hi Linda, and yes...I love the solar energy! Guess in the light of the sun has always been my favorite place to dance!  Thank you my friend!!

Hi Bill, and I hope your morning has been glorious where you are!! Thank you!!

Hi Chris, and yes it is!!  All we have really is today, so why not enjoy it I say!
Thank you!!

Hi KristieSue, and it's true..we can design our world any way we choose!! Thank you for your visit too!

Hi Olias, and posting here is always a privilege, and a great pleasure...thank you my friend!!

Hi Brad, and it's so good to see you too! You're right...I have a lot on my plate at the moment, but this is my favorite place full of my favorite people!!  Thank you, and I hope to see more of you too!!

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

QjQ
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14 posted 2003-04-24 01:35 PM


Morning spreads it's fingers
'round the circle of our world

what a wonderful way to start each day, the words and pic show n tell a fabulous write

"one needs not challenge all the players to win the game"

Sunnyone
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15 posted 2003-04-24 01:45 PM


Hi QjQ, and glad that you enjoyed this piece!  If every day started this way, it would be a perfect world...but at least we can try for it on a personal level...one morning at a time!!  Thank you, my friend!

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

Albert J. Allie
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16 posted 2003-04-24 01:50 PM


I believe that this was indeed an awesome piece of writing. Yep. Definitely!!


Mistletoe Angel
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17 posted 2003-04-24 04:06 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, this made a smile shine on my face too as all your wonderful encouraging words do! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sunnyone, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

And that's the most wonderful thing about creating. It will always be a mystery.

***Shakira***

Ariana
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18 posted 2003-04-24 10:18 PM


Sunny
Great words of encourgement.  You Go Girl!  Thank you for sharing.

BluesSerenade
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19 posted 2003-04-24 11:53 PM


The one and only......Sunnyone!

The morning holds such promise
when we leave the window open,  
as if to say, it's yours for the taking
if you want to let it in!

Love this shine of yours~

Sunnyone
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Staffordshire, England
20 posted 2003-04-25 05:44 AM


Hi Albert, and thank you so much!!! It's always nice to have good friends visit in reply and it makes my day!!!

Hi Noah!! You are just the one of the nicest poets I've met here at Passions, and it's always a pleasure to write back and forth, and thank you for your always lovely replies!

Hi Ariana, and I know the sun is shining where you are!!!  Get out there, and lay on the beach for me, ok?? Thank you, girl!!

Hi BluesSerenade!! So good to see your windows open this morning, letting in the new day and the sunshine!! Thank you for the words, my good friend, and have a great day!

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

littlewing
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New York
21 posted 2003-04-26 10:14 AM


Sunny:

if I shine half as much as you do
I will be one lucky soul

This is beautiful inspiration  xxoo

JamesMichael
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22 posted 2003-04-26 03:58 PM


As substantial as the Beatles "Good Day Sunshine"...James
junemac
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23 posted 2003-04-26 05:00 PM


Morning spreads it's fingers
'round the circle of our world
Like a blanket, wrapped in hope at each new dawn
A new day with it's chances and adventures lay in wait
And the shadows left from darkness
Now are gone...


WONDERFUL !!!!! i adore this poem. i think i would like to see this poem every day, first thing when i awake, just to remind me how beautiful life can be. thanks

hugs from june x

hugs from june x

vandana
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24 posted 2003-04-26 07:44 PM


one of your best enjoyed
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