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Mindfire
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since 2003-05-03
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0 posted 2003-05-04 03:28 PM



Ignorance in abundince
Intellectual redundence
cast them away
leave me be i want to play

Your minds are bound
Rational thought can't be found
Like ants they go about their day
They never stop or shy away

locked in their mode
back to their abode
wake early in the morn
On time for work lest face scorn

But time is time and time does fly
Go about your day as the days go by
Wake up one day and look in the mirror
And what do you see but all that you fear

Your hair is grey
wrinkles won't go away
With handfull of pills
Life holds no more thrills
                      

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BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
1 posted 2003-05-04 03:36 PM


When the thrill is gone, there isn't a whole lot to live for.  Pills are just a temporary fix, and the mirror has been known to lie.

Depends on how you look at it.
Interesting write~

Mindfire
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since 2003-05-03
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2 posted 2003-05-04 03:41 PM


Thank you, i think... It's very much true its all a matter of perespective.
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