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On a dolphin's back

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Margherita
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On a dolphin’s back
I ride my ocean of tears
she giggles me through.


© Copyright 2003 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
Sunnyone
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1 posted 04-24-2003 06:44 AM       View Profile for Sunnyone   Email Sunnyone   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunnyone's Home Page   View IP for Sunnyone

This is beautiful, and with so many different thoughts enclosed in it's simplicity!!  I love it!!

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

JamesMichael
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2 posted 04-24-2003 06:49 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

I think that would wash the tears away...James
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I know the magic
a dolphin shares...
this is beautiful, Margherita!
Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 04-24-2003 08:45 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Margherita
On a dolphin’s back you can find a dream,
enjoyed.
Earth Angel
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Mwwaaahhh! There's a great big kiss for this little piece of perfection! My dolphin helps me in the same manner!

Hugs & knowing smiles,
Linda
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6 posted 04-24-2003 09:06 AM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Love this!!  I also love dolpins!
Well done and much enjoyed.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Bill Charles
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Margherita - seen many dolphins in the oceans, and they are beautiful. Nice write...

BC
Kethry
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Dolfine piece of work
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown


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9 posted 04-24-2003 11:32 AM       View Profile for Brad Majors   Email Brad Majors   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Brad Majors

beautiful simplicity
Mistletoe Angel
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(smiles) Oh Margherita, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I love dolphins so much and always dream of swimming in the coral reefs with them! (kiss on cheek) This is magical, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Margherita, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

And that's the most wonderful thing about creating. It will always be a mystery.

***Shakira***

Laverne Pacquire
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11 posted 03-21-2010 05:40 PM       View Profile for Laverne Pacquire   Email Laverne Pacquire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Laverne Pacquire

this is one my favorite poems of yours so far.  this inspires me alot.

wonderful effort of imagery and words
the feeling is wonderful.
Earl Brinkman
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12 posted 05-19-2010 08:22 AM       View Profile for Earl Brinkman   Email Earl Brinkman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Earl Brinkman

The contrast of emotions of the protagionist and the dolphin make for a stark contrast.  A vivid image.
Margherita
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13 posted 05-22-2010 08:35 AM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

Thank you, dear Laverne and Earl, for your most kind comments here.

Love,
Margherita
 
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