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Ivy Rose
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since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300
MA, USA

0 posted 2003-04-24 12:51 PM



In the ancient lines
of time, we are
relative to time travel.
Past heart echoes off
a future heart. Becoming united,
married in a future-past
relationship. Scenes
of steamboats chugging down
the Connecticut River
as horse-drawn carriages
lumber by...a vision
that steals my soul away. You,
me, time, all interspersed.
Our eyes meet in a quiet
understanding. We are meant
to be. You and I...past dreams,
future hope. Destined to never
repeat...only grow deeper
and fuller in a timeless love.

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Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
1 posted 2003-04-24 01:22 AM


Ivy Rose -

Our eyes meet in a quiet
understanding. We are meant
to be. You and I...past dreams,
future hope. Destined to never
repeat...only grow deeper
and fuller in a timeless love.

'Quiet eyes, hearts blending into one... Two in dreams, not of the past but of future times, to hope again...growing in time when the moon leaves the night, and the day comes with the new dawn...'

This verse you have written is very true, very inspiring. Had to write this...

BC


JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2003-04-24 06:36 AM


Enjoyed...James
Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
3 posted 2003-04-24 06:39 AM


I'm a firm believer that soul mates share an unending destiny of united love, and this poem is so very special, my friend.....what a joy to read this today!

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
4 posted 2003-04-24 06:42 AM


Timeless love .....and your poem is of timeless beauty ...
Love, Margherita

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
5 posted 2003-04-24 09:46 AM


There is something very special about every poem of yours that I have had the pleasure of reading. This poem has captured my imagination once again! I love the surrealness of this timeless piece of timelessness!

Love & hugs,
EA

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
6 posted 2003-04-24 10:11 AM


This rode the waves of love so beautifully.
What wisdom in the eyes of the heart. TD

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
7 posted 2003-04-30 02:37 PM


This is a cool love poem....
I enjoyed very much!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


Mistletoe Angel
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8 posted 2003-04-30 10:51 PM




(smiles) Oh Ivy, this is beautiful, sweet friend, this made me smile as so many of your wonderful words do! (kiss on cheek) May the future ahead bring you a continuous supply of love, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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