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whiskey
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0 posted 2003-04-23 10:07 PM


Patiently I wait
As the days go slowly by
It feels like its taking forever
The day I long inside
The day of which I speak
Is the day I will meet you
To hold your tiny body
See you little face
Hold you to my skin
Give you warmth embrace
Stroke those little fingers
Tickle those little toes
The ones that keep me awake now
Punching, kicking me within
To see your hair colour
The colour of your eyes
Get lost in the wonder
Of what I grew inside
That day is coming soon
Although it feels like it will never come
That day I am await for
Is the day I will become a mum

[This message has been edited by whiskey (04-23-2003 11:28 PM).]

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BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
1 posted 2003-04-23 10:21 PM


How wondeful, and  congratulations!
What an exciting time for you. Be well little Mum, nothing like the first punch to remind you that you and your wee babe are alive and kicking.

Can't help sharing your happiness!!!

Martie
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2 posted 2003-04-23 10:29 PM


Whisky...there is nothing quite so special as what you are about to experience...
QjQ
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3 posted 2003-04-23 10:33 PM


a very loving write.  i enjoy this kind of write

"one needs not to challenge all the players to beat the game"

Gothkitty
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4 posted 2003-04-24 12:09 PM


Whiskey I was so happy to hear your news. I will be looking forward to piccies of the lil one once its here, Great write. You will make a wonderful mum.


Azz

Justbleu
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5 posted 2003-04-24 01:40 AM


How precious....congratulations!!!!  You must be so anxious!!!!  Hope the day comes soon!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


GG
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Lost in thought
6 posted 2003-04-24 01:42 AM


Wahoo! Congratulations!
both you and your baby will treasure this tribute in future years

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

garysgirl
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7 posted 2003-04-24 01:52 AM


What a sweet way to announce the expectancy of your little baby. I'll look forward
to seeing more pictures. Thanks, Ethel

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2003-04-24 06:34 AM


Already writing your feelings...nice...James
Margherita
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Eternity
9 posted 2003-04-24 06:37 AM


Congratulations. This is a wonderful, tender tribute to the new Life springing from you.
Love, Margherita

Sunnyone
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10 posted 2003-04-24 06:42 AM


I would like to add my congratulations to you, and wish your little one a Happy upcoming Birthday!!!!  What a beautiful event to look forward to...right now is the best time of your life!!!!!  God Bless.....

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01
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California
11 posted 2003-04-24 07:43 AM




Whiskey,

Love the title....and I wondered where you went...So good to have you posting. Wonderful news; glad you shared your touching poem with us..brought back precious memories well written, enjoyed...

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

scorpio
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right...there
12 posted 2003-04-24 08:40 AM


I hope you save this poem and read to your child when he/she is older...very beautiful..

believe in what your heart feels...

Sunshine
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13 posted 2003-04-24 08:44 AM



Congratulations!

Earth Angel
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14 posted 2003-04-24 08:48 AM


I wrote poems to my babies when I was carrying them and they now treasure them and read them from time to time. Your loving and heart-warming poem will one day be treasured by your child!

~ May your delivery be easy and uncomplicated.
~ May your baby be strong and healthy and have a wonderful and productive life filled with joy and prosperity.
~ God bless you both and the rest of your family!

Love & Eternal Light,
Linda

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
15 posted 2003-04-24 09:05 AM


What wonderful news...
Yes, do keep this poem and replies to show your little one.
When is the big day?  This is so exciting!
A Pip Kidlet!
~Smiles & Congratulatory Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

junemac
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since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005
uk
16 posted 2003-04-24 10:12 AM


i loved this one. congratulations too. it brought memories of carrying  my first baby.
wishing you love and happiness. you get my vote
june x

Bill Charles
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17 posted 2003-04-24 10:24 AM


whiskey - hi mum, congratulations, and my best to you and the little one...

BC

Kethry
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Victoria Australia
18 posted 2003-04-24 10:28 AM


How exciting and what a wonderful way to announce it.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
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Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
19 posted 2003-04-24 12:59 PM


congratulations...

what a lovely way to say it...

regards,
sudhir

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