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Ericc
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0 posted 2003-04-23 07:32 PM



Our skin communicates with the
voice of our wants.

There is an anticipation to
a touch.

Even from a world away.

The night has a breeze that holds
the breath of my desire.

Feel it move...warm across your
neck -

What does your skin tell you?

This is all we need to know.




© Copyright 2003 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
Startime55
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1 posted 2003-04-23 07:35 PM


Your words sends tingles up the spine that cover any distances...You are very talented...
Earth Angel
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2 posted 2003-04-23 08:11 PM


I'm with Startime! I actually got tingles reading this!

Romance is in the springtime air!
EA

whiskey
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3 posted 2003-04-23 09:28 PM


great imagery I felt that breeze kinda spooky


Julie

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4 posted 2003-04-23 10:44 PM


a very nice write

"one needs not challenge all the players to win the game"

Enchantress
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5 posted 2003-04-23 10:59 PM


Ooooh myyyy....shivers Eric...good shivers.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

garysgirl
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6 posted 2003-04-23 11:14 PM


Yes, Ericc, what Enchantress said....

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

Margherita
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7 posted 2003-04-24 05:03 AM


I think I passed the test .... what are you doing to our skins? Your words reach out far, dear Eric, the breeze on the neck is real ..... and here I sit "in Deinem Banne"! ... should be "under your spell".
What are you doing to my skin?
Very efficient poetry I would say!
Love, Margherita

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2003-04-24 06:45 AM


"This is all we need to know."
Excellent...James

passing shadows
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9 posted 2003-04-24 04:43 PM


whoa! It's hot in here...
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10 posted 2003-04-24 05:05 PM




(sigh) Oh Eric, this is lovely, sweet friend, this made me smile as all your passionate sensual poetry does! (big hugggsssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!



May love and light awlays shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

And that's the most wonderful thing about creating. It will always be a mystery.

***Shakira***

passing shadows
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11 posted 2003-05-25 02:01 AM


still hot in here
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