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Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

0 posted 2003-04-23 06:37 PM

                   You cannot break me
                   none of your marches
                   not even the screams
                   of dying children
                   can make me falter
                   for you feed me every day
                   and a every day a new brick is added
                   and the world comes alittle closer
                   to becoming completely shrouded
                   in my shade
                   Once I was a way of life
                   I kept things "the way they should be"
                   and should have stayed
                   I took ignorrance and your hidden desires
                   and used time
                   till it cultivated into hate
                   and rage
                   against those you though
                   who wouldn't or couldn't
                   fight back
                   It went well for a time
                   then they came and pierced your hearts
                   and shook your apathy
                   now you try to destroy me
                   with love and equality
                   I laugh in your face
                   you have not changed
                   for why am still here
                   and growing daily
                   it may be harder to see
                   the hate in your eyes
                   but it's there
                   I know
                   For I am in your heart and soul
                   For once you sleep with hate
                   you becoming its slave
                   for all eternity
                   I could destroy you now
                   but its fun watching you
                   destroy each other
                   So good night
                   Pleasant dreams
                   For your tommorow
                   will never come.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2003-04-23 07:07 PM

This pounded to the ground like a hammer...
There is no ease in hatred, only the solid walls that it builds. Good title. TD

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

2 posted 2003-04-23 07:17 PM

Very powerful writing.
Eric

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

3 posted 2003-04-23 07:19 PM

WOW!!!!STUNNING!!! THIS POEM MAKES THE READER REACH DEEP INSIDE AND THINK...

whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

4 posted 2003-04-23 09:42 PM

Great writing very powerful indeed. It is sad to think this is reality to come if not already here.

Julie

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

5 posted 2003-04-23 09:59 PM

Very powerful
Jason

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

6 posted 2003-04-24 10:58 AM

thank you

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