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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-04-23 04:18 PM


Mix It Up

I knew it would be
just a matter of time
until I would be Laura's
and Laura would be mine.

But alas this was
not a beautiful
love story that
was meant to be.

We became good buddies
and good buddies
don't mix it up
romantically.

JamesLee
April 23
2003

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Jason Lyle
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With my darkling
1 posted 2003-04-23 04:22 PM


But sometimes they do..........physically.....
nice write.
Jason

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2003-04-23 04:49 PM


good advice! good write!
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2003-04-23 06:07 PM


Thank you Jason and passing shadows for the nice comments.
Yes sometimes it does happen Jason...James

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
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4 posted 2003-04-23 07:21 PM


Wow...I think we have all been there. Nicely said.
Eric

whiskey
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5 posted 2003-04-23 09:39 PM


Great write James, I think we all have been in that situation before, wanting to mix it up with someone but not wanting to lose the friendship in the process.


Julie

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