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0 posted 2003-04-23 04:02 PM



You trusted me and found you’re safe,
have let me walk within your heart,
where I’ve seen beauty with each gaze.
My dear, you are a work of art.

In another life, you’d be mine.
At least, that is my fantasy.
Just thinking of you brings a smile.
Sweet one, you are the breath of me.

But is it wrong to feel such love
for friend who is my very best,
to want to kiss your eyes,  your lips,
to feel your heart beat ‘gainst my chest?

I cannot help the way I feel
and I will not apologize,
for wanting to express my love,
for longing so to kiss your eyes.

One breath away, just one short breath,
yet in this life you‘re out of reach,
but in my dreams you’re always here,
sitting with me upon the beach.

I love you, precious.

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1 posted 2003-04-23 04:09 PM


awwww....would you look at this?! What complete sweetness....that is one lucky friend you have
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2 posted 2003-04-23 04:16 PM


No, I'm the lucky one.   She truly is a very beautiful blessing to my life.   hugsss
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3 posted 2003-04-23 04:47 PM


Michael...Most tenderly written and not wrong.  
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4 posted 2003-04-23 04:48 PM


beautiful!
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5 posted 2003-04-23 05:35 PM


Michael, you are truly blessed to have a friend like this.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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6 posted 2003-04-23 07:11 PM


So beautiful.
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7 posted 2003-04-23 08:00 PM


Live life and love well...

Warm hugs,
Linda

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8 posted 2003-04-23 08:21 PM


Michael - oh, how lucky you are to have such a wonderful friend. Of course, you are an easy fellow to like and become fast friends with.Enjoyed this. hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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9 posted 2003-04-23 10:23 PM


What a wonderful expression of love felt for someone very special to you. Makes the heart beat a little stronger. Thankyou for sharing

Julie

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10 posted 2003-04-24 09:52 AM


"One breath away, just one short breath,
yet in this life you‘re out of reach,"

It's hard not to be in tune with this, especially since you say it all so well, capture the feeling so clearly. An excellent piece of writing on a subject that's hard for a man to admit, let alone talk about.

Be glad of this -- you have a tiny part, if only that. Some men blunder into mounds of gold and don't recognize it, cast it away. Others may find a tiny nugget, but they know and treasure it. You're one of those.

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11 posted 2003-04-25 10:31 PM




(smiles) Oh Michael, this is beautiful, sweet friend, your dearest friend is so fortunate to have you close to her heart as you are what brings her much joy! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

      
Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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12 posted 2003-04-26 07:32 PM



Martie,
Tell my wife that. LOL!  Thanks!

Dixie,
Much appreciated!

Nancy,
She's a great lady, it is my wish that everyone had such a friend.  Thank you and hugs back.

ThisDiamond,
I do thank you for reading.

Linda,
Good advice, Thank you.  Hugs in return.

Chris,
The same could be said of you.  You're a great lady.  Hugs, my friend.

Julie,
I'm glad you liked this, thanks so much for reading.

Ratleader,
Even a tiny part of such a beautiful soul is enough to make me feel very rich and much blessed.  Thank you for reading and for your kind words.  They're greatly appreciated.

Noah,
Your responses always give me such a big smile.  Thank you, good friend.

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