melting pot of two old poems :)

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wings of the moon
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0 posted 2003-04-23 03:34 PM

Even you,
    my muse,

           will just abandon me?
a few loyal years
have meant nothing to thee?

           I dip my fingers in paint,
             spread its texture on cold
but the face reflected back...

intrudes.
             oh, so politely!

a frame, sun-kissed in red
drowns the ghost of a land


     will my muse,
             just once more let me,
     mix the beauty with the soil?

QjQ
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1 posted 2003-04-23 03:50 PM

quite a interesting write,

wings of the moon
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2 posted 2003-04-23 03:53 PM

Thank you QjQ for your reply

"more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you"

passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-04-26 12:21 PM

good merge

wings of the moon
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4 posted 2003-04-26 07:31 AM

whoops!
I didn't mean to submit this to the book, please don't waste votes on it...
(claire scolds herself)

love,
Claire

"more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you"

Aenimal
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5 posted 2003-04-27 02:09 AM

Loved the merge i do the same sometimes I have a bunch of disjointed lines but find away to use them in other poems or create merges like this.

Temptress

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6 posted 2003-04-27 02:22 AM

lovely

You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL

wings of the moon
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7 posted 2003-04-27 05:04 AM

thank you aenimal,
luckily the lines make sense (to me at least) when joined together lol.

love,
claire

"more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you"

wings of the moon
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8 posted 2003-04-27 05:05 AM

Thank you Temptress for your sweet word

love,
Claire

"more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you"

littlewing
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9 posted 2003-04-27 07:07 AM

Claire:

I believe your muse just did
this is incredible
good luck
xxoo

wings of the moon
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10 posted 2003-04-27 07:31 AM

dear little wing,
thank you so much for your reply

love,
Claire

"more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you"

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11 posted 2003-05-04 12:35 PM

Enjoyed this melting pot.

wings of the moon
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12 posted 2003-05-04 12:38 PM

thanks midnitesun,
might have been at the right temperature, what do you think?

Zaynab
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13 posted 2003-05-04 12:43 PM

gorgeous sweetie!

ah, melting pot.... i'm hungry! lol

off to get some tea

xxxxxxxx

Kill me tonight and I will love again
Leave me to live and I live in pain
Leave me no love and I live in vain
Kill me tonight and kill the pain

wings of the moon
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14 posted 2003-05-04 12:49 PM

Lol!!
you insatiable hungry person!!

Thanks for your comments hun

(darn. me is hungry too now!)

"more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you"

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