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rm711
Member

since 2002-11-30

Posts 131
Wiltshire, England

0 posted 2003-04-23 11:31 AM

I’m just me
Screw you if you gotta problem
I’m happy
Leave me alone

Switch off
Daydream
You can’t touch me here
I can’t hear you now
And I don’t want to

I’ll never pretend
I’ll always be myself
And I don’t care what you think
I’m happy
Leave me alone

Switch off
Daydream
You can’t touch me here
I can’t hear you now
And I don’t want to

All you ever do
Is scream and shout
I’m always wrong
You’re always right
But I don’t care anymore
I’m happy
Leave me alone

Switch off
Daydream
You can’t touch me here
I can’t hear you now
And I don’t want to.

And I don't want the world to see me 'Cause I don't think that they'd understand When everything's made to be broken I just want you to know who I am

© Copyright 2003 Rosie Mitchell - All Rights Reserved

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

1 posted 2003-04-23 11:36 AM

Nope can't be touched there....but then you wake up and leave out of there. Anywayz, I like how you repeated the stanzas. NICE!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-04-24 07:43 PM

I have known feelings like these many times. I really enjoyed the read.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mary Ann
Member

since 2003-04-23

Posts 111

3 posted 2003-04-24 07:51 PM

Great writing, i like it a lot

I think this would be good as lyrics to a rock/alternative style of music...

God bless,
Mary Ann

MikeFessel
Member

since 2003-04-19

Posts 321
Brooklyn, NYC, USA

4 posted 2003-04-24 08:43 PM

A poem of pure emotion, my favorite

This is great, the style, the message, I like it all. This would make great lyrics.

Mike

Kielo
Senior Member

since 2002-02-11

Posts 1109

5 posted 2003-04-24 08:45 PM

*smile* I need this feeling more often.

I like it.

Kielo

I know only one thing, and that thing is that I know nothing.

whiskey

Deputy Moderator 1 Tour

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

6 posted 2003-04-24 09:13 PM

Good stuff, I like this sort of poem you can feel the raw emotion. Very nice

Julie

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