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garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-04-23 07:38 AM

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~~~~~
High in the sky the moon
is in the dark of night
Within our hearts the love
is shining a brilliant light

Down lifes road we dance
as we travel hand in hand
Moving along the trail
hearing music of loves band

Our favorite song we hear words of
as the music is softly playing
Our feet together we move
as our bodies are gently swaying

Sounding clearly are the words
as they flow softly through
Breezes in the air
carry them to me and you

When we are close together
or space has us apart
We still have our love dances
with the music in our heart

Above all else we cherish
our love between us two
Wanting it to last forever
there always being a me and you
~~~~~

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

1 posted 2003-04-23 07:49 AM

'Above all else we cherish
our love between us two
Wanting it to last forever
there always being a me and you'

A want we can all understand...

!

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2003-04-23 08:23 AM

When we are close together
or space has us apart
We still have our love dances
with the music in our heart

This is the phrase I liked best, great read.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2003-04-23 08:27 AM

High in the sky the moon
is in the dark of night
Within our hearts the love
is shining a brilliant light
=============================

Seems to me your becoming one of pips romance poet Queens.

Lovely write of your heart poetess
( cool font too)

You're the best I've ever felt ...
it's so wrong not to be with you.
It's getting harder to stay away,
it stops my heart just to be with you.

SH

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2003-04-23 10:49 AM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Ethel, this is so beautiful as all your romantic poetry is, sweet friend, I cried reading this because I always dream of my future love and how we too cry in joy hearing our favorite song together and how I want to sing to her! (wipes tears) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

And that's the most wonderful thing about creating. It will always be a mystery.

***Shakira***

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

5 posted 2003-04-23 11:15 AM

garysgirl - you did it, the dance poem you said you were going to write. It's excellent, and from one romantic to another, I love it...

BC

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2003-04-23 11:23 AM

Ethel, I agree with JM...
You are the Queen of romance here at Passions.
What you write is so beautifully romantic...always.
Much enjoyed...a keeper for sure.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2003-04-23 11:25 AM

Ethel & Gary, Gary & Ethel--together forever, forever together...

Love makes the world go 'round!
Warm hugs,
Linda

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (04-23-2003 11:25 AM).]

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

8 posted 2003-04-23 01:00 PM

Ethel, What a lovely offering to us! Thankyou for this. The pic is beautiful too. hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

9 posted 2003-04-23 01:05 PM

May you always dance in Love's music...
I enjoyed... nicely done..

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

10 posted 2003-04-23 07:45 PM

"Above all else we cherish
our love between us two
Wanting it to last forever
there always being a me and you"

We all want a relationship like this that can be cherished for a lifetime.

Wonderful dance ... hugs, Marti

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

11 posted 2003-04-23 10:38 PM

love is in your heart and in your thoughts in this one for sure

"one needs not challenge all the players to win the game"

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

12 posted 2003-04-24 06:40 AM

Lovely...James

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

13 posted 2003-04-24 10:14 AM

You have melted so sweetly the smile of your relationship onto this page.
TD

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

14 posted 2003-04-24 12:42 PM

Duncan,

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Seymour,

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.
Janet Marie,

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Noah,

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.
Thank you all very much. I really do
appreciate all your sweet replies.
And,it makes me really feel good
for ya'll to like something from
my poem well enough to quote it.

Hugs,
Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (04-24-2003 12:54 PM).]

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

15 posted 2003-04-24 12:50 PM

Bill,
yeah I did write one. Your love poetry
always inspires me to write another
love poem for Gary. Thank you. I'm
glad that you liked it.

.
.
Nancy Lee,
thank you. That's so sweet, but there are a
whole lot of "Queen's Of Romance" here at
Passions. That makes me feel really good for ya'll
to say that, though.

I love your
poetry and am always inspired by it.

.
.
Hugs to both of you
Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (04-24-2003 12:55 PM).]

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

16 posted 2003-04-24 12:58 PM

Linda,

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Chris,

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Capt Ron, :heart
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Marti,

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.
Thank you all very much. I appreciate
each of you so much. Thank you all
for reading and leaving such nice replies.
Hugs to you all,
Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (04-24-2003 01:00 PM).]

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

17 posted 2003-04-24 01:01 PM

QjQ,

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.
James

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Kathleen

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.
I appreciate each one of you for reading
and leaving such nice replies.

Hugs to you all,
Ethel

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

18 posted 2003-04-24 07:55 PM

So very beautifully put....the music of love flows through this poem...

MikeFessel
Member

since 2003-04-19

Posts 321
Brooklyn, NYC, USA

19 posted 2003-04-24 08:37 PM

Oh this resonates with beautiful feelings and emotions. A wonderful poem of love.

Mike

Kielo
Senior Member

since 2002-02-11

Posts 1109

20 posted 2003-04-24 08:42 PM

*grin* I love it. (That means they converted me.

Don't tell...)

When we are close together
or space has us apart
We still have our love dances
with the music in our heart

I love this part... It's amazing. I haven't been this dreamy after reading a poem in a long time.

Kielo

I know only one thing, and that thing is that I know nothing.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

21 posted 2003-04-25 01:01 AM

Startime, I'm really glad that you liked
my poem and that you heard the music
of love flowing through. Thank you.

Hugs,
Ethel

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

22 posted 2003-04-25 01:15 AM

Thank you, Mike. Those are really nice
comments. I appreciate them.
And, welcome to Passions.

Hugs,
Ethel

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

23 posted 2003-04-25 01:18 AM

Kielo, I'm really glad that you got
converted.

And, the part that
you quoted is my favorite part too,
I think. Hey, I'm glad it made you feel
dreamy, too.

Hugs,
Ethel

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

24 posted 2003-04-25 11:05 AM

When we are close together
or space has us apart
We still have our love dances
with the music in our heart

This is so beautifully romantic... and I love this verse in particular... It reminds me of all those who are sustained by a love that knows no distance as they find they must be apart for some reason. *S*
Bodies may be dancing miles apart... the hearts hold close through each dip and sway. *S*

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