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whiskey
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0 posted 2003-04-23 01:15 AM


I call out your name in my dream
Your face close becomes
You kiss upon my lips
Together one moment we are one
Time stops still
The bliss me overcomes
Your soul entangles mine
Connecting as whole once half
Before this now moment I fell
Into your big brown eyes
Your love surrounded me
Your sweetness engulfed my all
I gave you my heart
Belong to you it will never part
Your my angel overlooking my life
I have felt you always forever
Since the day I was born
You guided me to you
Now together for always
Time shall pass
You and me beat one heart


© Copyright 2003 Julie Nelson - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2003-04-23 01:22 AM


Enjoyed...James
Dark Angel
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2 posted 2003-04-23 07:19 PM


You and me beat one heart

love that line.. enjoyed whiskey

Maree.



whiskey
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3 posted 2003-04-23 11:53 PM


Thankyou for your replys I enjoy reading all the lovely poems from so talented poets on this forum.

Julie

MikeFessel
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4 posted 2003-04-24 06:44 PM


Oh! I posted a poem with the same name, and I clicked this thinking it was mine. What a pleasant surprise!
  Ahh, this is much better than my own poem. Such a happy, loving piece I thoroughly enjoyed this! Hope I bump into your work again!

           Mike
        

Startime55
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5 posted 2003-04-24 07:36 PM


Uniquely and beautifully said...
Kielo
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6 posted 2003-04-24 09:13 PM


I like this very much. The words switched around make it fun to read, too.

Kielo

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QjQ
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7 posted 2003-04-24 09:58 PM


The bliss me overcomes
Your soul entangles mine

wow what lines,  a absolute write!!

"one needs not challenge all the players to win the game"

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8 posted 2003-04-25 10:46 PM




(sigh) Oh Julie, this is beautiful, sweet friend, and may your angel always guide your heart with loving care and light! (kiss on cheek) This is mesmerizing, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

      
Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

Mary Ann
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9 posted 2003-04-26 12:02 PM


I like this poem a lot   The interplay of words throughout was great..very beautiful work...  

God bless,

Mary Ann


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10 posted 2003-04-26 07:46 PM


liked this
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