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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-04-22 05:54 PM


Mr. Toyota

Girl where are you going
and where have you been?
If you only knew how badly
I wanted to see you again.
I tried to call you but
you disconnected your phone.
Perhaps a message for me
to leave you alone?
I suppose that I could just
jump in Mr. Toyota and drive
on by where you live.
But if you can't take
the time to call me
you wouldn't care if I did.
I guess this is it girl
if your desire is
to leave me all alone.
I'm not going to waste
the gas in Mr. Toyota
if you can't take the time
to pick up a phone.

JamesLee
April22
2003



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QjQ
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1 posted 2003-04-22 05:56 PM


a nice write,  
SPIRIT
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2 posted 2003-04-22 06:14 PM


Great! I really liked this - put a smile on my face.
Midnitesun
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3 posted 2003-04-23 12:00 PM


lol, maybe she is waiting for Mr Honda?
James, hope she calls, maybe she really is just busy? or maybe she called when you were out driving Mr T ?

Sunnyone
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4 posted 2003-04-24 01:54 PM


I had a Mr. Toyota once, and I missed a lot of phone calls back in those days, as it was always on the road!!  So, next time, take your mobile phone, and you might just get that call!!!!! I too enjoyed this one!!!

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

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5 posted 2003-04-24 04:08 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh James, I hate to see you hurting again, sweet friend, I hope this doesn't relate to you now and now you can sail over the moon with love hand in hand! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

And that's the most wonderful thing about creating. It will always be a mystery.

***Shakira***

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2003-04-24 06:02 PM


Thank you QTQ, Spirit, midnite, Sunyone and Noah for the nice responses.
I believe for a relationship to work you need good communication...a phone call would be nice...I have an answering machine and a pager...until then Mr Toyota will be seeking new driveways...James

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