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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2003-04-22 01:06 PM





*Some days are just 'remembering' days*
~This is one of those~





~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (04-22-2003 04:51 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-04-22 01:21 PM


Oh so beautiful Marge.
~Heart Hugs~

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2 posted 2003-04-22 01:21 PM


The aloneness that returns me here without you.

That's enough to make my eyes water.
Where's the hanky alert Margie?
This is sadly beautiful~

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3 posted 2003-04-22 01:27 PM


Those weep remembering days sneak up on us from time to time. Tears are good for cleansing the soul at anytime.

This is indeed special.  Hugs, Marti

Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts.  A.Einstein

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4 posted 2003-04-22 01:29 PM


Marge this was so touching !!!
and beautifully written
Hope

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5 posted 2003-04-22 01:36 PM


Why do I see a poet friend sitting quietly on that bench?
Peacful thoughts to you, Marge.

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6 posted 2003-04-22 01:42 PM


Dear Marge:  This is so touching.  We seldom know what triggers these journeys into yesterday.

Love
Betty Lou

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Ah Marge - so glad my photo inspired you - this is a very special photograph for me - taken with a very special friend in mind.  Thank you for putting just the right words with this...now it is most certainly a

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8 posted 2003-04-22 05:11 PM


Poignantly beautiful. And Karilea's picture of the willow tree and the lonely bench is very beautiful too.
Love to both. Margherita

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9 posted 2003-04-22 07:49 PM


A beautiful memory that you share with us....I love it...
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10 posted 2003-04-22 07:59 PM


Very beautiful!
It’s always nice to fly over to your post!


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11 posted 2003-04-22 08:00 PM


This is absolutely beautiful. The picture is too.
Love,
Betty

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12 posted 2003-04-22 08:07 PM


This hits me in the aftermath of "Peaches", /pip/Forum79/HTML/000439.html as I am being melancholy over the fact that the first two girls I ever cared about, one a lifelong friend and the other nearly so, died at 28, and 26, respectively.....

....moves me maybe too much, if that can be said of a poem.....

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13 posted 2003-04-22 08:40 PM


Marge my sis...How poignant an empty bench can be..you captured that so well in your words to Karilea's beautiful photo.  
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14 posted 2003-04-23 01:59 AM


Should be a poster Marge ... fits perfectly, to the walls of our hearts

wonderful read

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15 posted 2003-04-23 03:02 PM


Perfect combination of images... the words and photograph meld seamlessly and touch deeply. *S*
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16 posted 2003-04-23 04:27 PM


Beautiful!
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Marge Tindal
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18 posted 2003-04-23 05:32 PM


I thank each of you for letting us share with you.

Karilea ... thank you for letting my voice 'speak' your lovely photo~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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