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sing'n fool
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since 2003-04-17
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Morris, Il

0 posted 2003-04-22 12:49 PM



Hole

There's a hole in my soul
that the wind passes through.
A constant reminder,
of a love I once knew.

To whom I gave my heart
and my soul,
and all I got in return
was this gaping hole.

Now I am burdened
with a love that is lost.
I try to protect myself
no matter what the cost!

They say that time heals all scars,
that maybe so,
but does time have a plug
for the hole in my soul?

Sing'n fool

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2003-04-22 12:52 PM


hello, and welcome
Pips can help fill that hole, yanno?

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2003-04-22 01:48 PM


Ah, such a sad write Michael.
But still...one I did enjoy reading.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
3 posted 2003-04-23 02:36 AM


Michael - time and guidance will
do wonders - you will do wonders
Welcome to PIP!
You will love it here
xxoo

luvlorn322
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since 2002-10-28
Posts 43

4 posted 2003-04-23 07:20 AM


i can relate, and there is always hope in rubbermaid, hang in there
FlyingCloud
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since 2003-04-28
Posts 151
A little place inside my head
5 posted 2003-04-29 06:39 PM


Perhaps your name decieves us, singin' fool, because you aren't a fool when it comes to knowing how people feel.

^~Whoever does not love his work cannot hope that it will please others.~^
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teenpoet
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since 2001-10-17
Posts 280
Michigan
6 posted 2003-04-30 02:29 PM


Very emotive poem.  I'm sure though that this place will help.  I've been away from here ever since I signed on and just finally came back in this last month and it's been great.  Everyone's so helpful and encouraging and their critiques often help.  I really have enjoyed being here and I'm positive you will too.  And maybe you'll find a plug.

~Keep dreaming~

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
7 posted 2003-04-30 02:32 PM


Love can leave scars....OUCH!!!
I hope to read more from your pen!!!!
HUGS,
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


edh
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since 2003-03-26
Posts 111

8 posted 2003-04-30 05:11 PM


Time heals all wounds and wounds all heels.
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