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vandana
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0 posted 2003-04-22 10:16 AM



There Is a way
To fInd you agaIn
Iam sorry
If I hurt you
I swear
To God
I WIll make you happy
If you come back
In my arms
If I fInd you
I will swear
I will rule the world for you
I will conquer the world
That will be a promise
I swear
I will buy you a diamond ring
I will marry you
Life will carry on
for us again
Little darling
You are my life
You are my love
you are the greatest thing I ever had
If I find you again
I pray each day and night
to bring you home
If I find you
I swear
I will rule the world
I give you my hand to hold
I will give strenght
To stand own your feet
I will bring you joy
In your life
If I find you

© Copyright 2003 vandana - All Rights Reserved
littlewing
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1 posted 2003-04-22 10:20 AM


. . . and may your search be short

loved this V

xxoo  

Margherita
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2 posted 2003-04-22 04:28 PM


Dear vandana, this is delightful.
Love, Margherita

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2003-04-22 05:59 PM


Very sincere...James
Startime55
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4 posted 2003-04-22 07:33 PM


Your yearning plead is felt in every word you write....you touch the soul of your reader, very deeply....Wonderful writing.
Enchantress
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5 posted 2003-04-22 07:35 PM


Very well expressed...
I do hope all is well.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Mistletoe Angel
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6 posted 2003-04-25 02:56 PM






(smiles) Oh Vandana, this is very heartfelt, sweet friend, I know you will find him and live happily ever after with the comfort close to your heart! (kiss on cheek) I send special friendship hugs your way, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

And that's the most wonderful thing about creating. It will always be a mystery.

***Shakira***

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7 posted 2003-06-01 02:47 AM



Midnitesun
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8 posted 2003-06-01 01:52 PM


here's hoping the search is successful
well done, poet friend

garysgirl
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9 posted 2003-06-01 02:42 PM


Vandana, I can feel every word that you
write because you are so sincere with your
writing. I also hope that you will find him soon.  
Hugs to you, Vandana  
Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (06-01-2003 02:43 PM).]

bslicker
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10 posted 2003-06-01 02:48 PM


this one is      

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

littlewing
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11 posted 2003-06-01 04:36 PM


Vandana:

lovely writing
keep finding . . .
they will answer - how can they not to such devotion

this is something all of us long to hear
beautiful
xxoo

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